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Sageheart's decision: Chapter 2

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I have never gotten so many comments before!: D here you go. But I warn you because once you finish this chapter you will be swimming in deep water.

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"He's okay." The words relieved Sagepaw. "But what's wrong with him?" Sagepaw asked Fallenwhisker (the medicine cat) "he's in shock. Your brother is small." Mewed Fallenwhisker. "Everyone calls him small." Grunted Sagepaw.

"I'm going hunting!" Sagepaw told Fernpelt. "I'm fine with that." Mewed Fernpelt. Once Sagepaw got outside the ThunderClan camp, she smelled something strange. Fox. Sagepaw sniffed the air like Fernpelt had taught her. It wasn't stale. Sagepaw spotted some orange, a young fox. Sagepaw hissed. The fox sprang up in surprise, running quickly. Behind her, Sagepaw saw Sheepstar and Fernpelt. "I think your ready to be a warrior."

Comments (39)

autorenew

394 days ago
Needs a bit more other that that it is great
574 days ago
hey i need to tell you something.. Im a girl and... Im in love with mu Cuz and its a Girl! GuEsS iM gAy!
574 days ago
How about this for a backstory.. When ShadowHeart was a kitten, Her parents did not care about her... They did not feed her or Take care of her! she had a Sister, her name has Brightpaw, she was loved! But shadow was not loved.. So one night Shadow ranaway! She
wonder and wonder, But no hope! The next day Shadows parents did not care! that she ranaway, but Brightpaw did! Shadow was thinking.. My parents don't love me i should just Go die.. So shadow was on the Road waiting for a Car to hit her. Then BrightPaw was wondering
In till she seen Shadow! she have Bite her tail in Order to save her! shadow said.. Why did you save me? BrightPaw said.. Bc i love You! After that happen, BrightPaw ranaway with Shadow! later they seen a lot of Cats and wanted to join them. So the cats let them join!
So as they grew Older, they fighted! There parents still don't know were there at.. But there parents said.. I will find you Cats and if i do you'll have a FIGHT.. the end (wat ya think?!)
574 days ago
shadowheart.. Try thinking of a backstory that goes with the Name!
574 days ago
Yassssssssss u cannnnnnnnn!!!! :3
574 days ago
SoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo Can i help Ya with the backstory?? -3-
574 days ago
tHaNk YoU uWu OkIe OwO
574 days ago
And I love the backstory!! Shadowheart doesn't have a backstory yet though ;-; and I have a backstory for Whitefoot but it's old and its trash
574 days ago
Allthetests Is not strict at all, only with the tests and if you put something inappropriate in a comment, it will do this: 💗
574 days ago
I never been blocked before :p
574 days ago
if i was blocked.. i was blocked on wikihow just 1 time and they forgive meh!
574 days ago
This is the backstory of StarNight.. When StarNight was a Kitten, Her mom got hit by a Car.
StarNight Pass out when she seen that, Then she woke up. she wonder places looking for food, Then she was in a place full of "CaTs" she was Dare to Fight! So she did, she won the fight for a Lil cute Kitten. as she grew Up, she had to fight ALOT! and i mean ALOT, to this Day she fights.. But one time she Got a Bad injury! she was half Blind! But that did not stop her from fighting, the other cats think shes the best at fighting! But.. one day 2 new cats come, she
knew her 2 sisters.. LunaPaw, and Darklight.. they looked just like them... Thats the end of the backstory.. Or is it.. YoU lIkE iT?? UwU
574 days ago
And you should try to make a test!
574 days ago
How would you react if we got Blocked? D:
574 days ago
Thanks! Me too! I just want the red too be lilac purple!
574 days ago
i like the talk page!
574 days ago
I like your Oc names! Mine are Whitefoot and Shadowheart!
574 days ago
OoOoOoOoOo NiCe UwU
574 days ago
Oh and I just got my talk page decorated!! :D
574 days ago
I have 3 ocs there.. DarkLight, lunapaw, And StarNight.. :3