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Chasing the Sun Chapter 8

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2 Chapter - 571 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 245 taken- The story is completed

This is a rewrite of the chapter I wrote I didn't think it was good so I wrote a new one before Chapter 9 was made So Here you guys go!

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Foxhowl stared at the pine forest. She had been waiting to see her brother Fox's Moon and her sister Leaf's Flutter in her dreams from The Tribe of Endless Hunting for half a moon now. Foxhowl turned around as a fox colored tom with yellow eyes leaped passed her. "Father!" Foxhowl purred. "I wouldn't miss out on this travel my little fox." Foxhowl's Father mewed. "I miss Fox's Moon and Leaf's Flutter." Foxhowl mewed softly. "I know Foxhowl but what happened with Sharp Tooth was no one's fault stop blaming yourself for what happened. You wanted to come here so look to the bright side." "I will Father." Foxhowl smiled. "Your amber glow like the sun my kit." Foxhowl's Father mewed. "I may still be a kit but I firece!" Foxhowl purred. "Oh yes my firece kit." Foxhowl's Father smiled. Foxhowl rembered what had called her to the pine forest after Sharp Tooth. "Foxhowl didn't you hear me?" Foxhowl's father mewed. "What did you Father?" Foxhowl mewed pulling her away from her thoughts. "I said why don't we worked on your blind side?" Foxhowl's Father mewed. "Ummm sure Father." Foxhowl mewed. Foxhowl heard a stick crack. "Foxhowl climb a tree quickly!" Foxhowl's Father yowled. Foxhowl could smell the dog now as the dog came over the hill. Foxhowl's Father leaped at the dog and bit the dog. The dog fell to the ground. Foxhowl climbed down the tree. "Father are you ok?" Foxhowl asked her father. "Foxhowl I can't take you any farther. You are on your own now." Foxhowl's Father voice cracked. "Why Father why can't you take me any farther?" Foxhowl mewed. "I just can't leave the mountains without the family. I feel broken without your mother, sister, and brother. Leaving the mountains will just break me more." Foxhowl's Father mewed. "I understand I will come back someday Father." Foxhowl mewed.

Comments (339)

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Yesterday
WRITE IT!OR I WILL KILL YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMILY!!!*I just watched Hamilton...*
Yesterday
Question Jay are you going to write Eighteen?
Yesterday
OwO I got to agree with Jay.....
Yesterday
oooooooop awkward
Yesterday
Father?! Where are you???? O~O
Yesterday
Hello Father. How are you?
3 days ago
Thank you,I',m getting the team to post three chapters today
3 days ago
Okay Flaggy, I'll get right on it. OOPS YOU SAID THAT TWO DAYS AGO. Um, I'll do it quickly? SORRY
5 days ago
DIE FOX DIEEE MR FLAGGY!*Teleport to the last chapter*Kills Flagstar
5 days ago
Also Jay,I don't care,I need it out by tomorrow,just show Jake running back and the Clan training for battle and Mr.Gingerpaw apears and says "Flagstar,History Has its eye on you."
5 days ago
NO!Foxhowl becomes Foxstar!
6 days ago
:3 She must die for her crimes.
6 days ago
May I murder Foxhowl for talking about my father like that and from jumping on him>
6 days ago
That is how much I dislike Flameyboy. HE MURDERED MY KIN WITH DOGS!!! UwU That is unforget able.
6 days ago
:3 I like to pretend that Flameyboy is a huge spider that needs to die. >:3
6 days ago
XD Idk ask Flaggy on Scratch.
6 days ago
WOW OKAY.
first of all FOXHOWL CALM DOWN
second of all WHAT THE HECK HAPPENS IN CHAPTER EIGHTEEEEEEEEN
6 days ago
"EKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK" *Jumps on Flameclaw* "Die Spider Die! Die Spider Die! Die Spider Die!
6 days ago
Hello Allthettests,did you miss me?
6 days ago
FLAMECLAW COMES BACK AT 5:00 PM!EVERYBODY HIDE!