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Chasing The Sun Chapter Nine and A bit of Flameclaw

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Here, at last, also I am going to write Chapter Ten as Anisetoe

Flagstar watched JayfeatherBB lead a patrol into camp with a young kit carried by Seedmoon."Who's this?"he asked."His name is Fox's Howl, we found him by the border."said Jake.Flagstar shook his head, the young tom was so much like a fox.Seedmoon set him down and Fox's Howl stirred."Where am I?'asked the young cat."You are in AllthetestClan."said Flagstar."I've heard of the Clans! A red tabby with amber eyes once told me about them."said the tom.Some murmers and hisses arose from the Clan."Let him join the Clan as Foxkit."Flagstar said.Foxkit smiled and stood up facing him.

Flagstar heard JayfeatherBB talking and he woke up."Anisetoe came back!"he said a tiny bit worried."What's wrong?"Flagstar asked."She is about to have Flameclaw's kits."JayfeatherBB said.He sat there, shocked.A yowl of pain echoed through camp.The two toms raced out the den and saw Anisetoe laying outside the Leader's Den.Flagstar picked her up and brought her into the den.She yowled in pain."Her first kit is coming!"said a worried JayfeatherBB.Flagstar tried to calm him down but saw that the kit was coming tail first.Flagstar stroked JayfeatherBB's side with his tail.Anisetoe yowled again as a red tabby kit appeared at her belly and soon he was joined by five other kits. Anisetoe lifted her head, tiredly. JayfeatherBB looked at Flagstar with the same thought, The Clan will never trust her or her kits. Flagstar looked at Anisetoe and opened his mouth but she shook her head. "I know, this is a bad time to come, but in FlameClan when you have kits that have a single issue they are killed with no second thought. I was scared for my kits and came here. I only stopped here to inform you with this: FlameClan is going to attack and Ravenpaw was blinded and now has a crippled leg. Please save yourselves, I don't want more death than there has to be. " She said. " Where will you go? " asked JayfeatherBB. " Twolegplace once my kits are strong enough to walk, though I may let this one stay here and this one to FlameClan. " she said pointing at the kit that looked like her and the red tabby. Flagstar got up and left. A scent drifted to him and his world went dark.

Flagstar woke in a dark den with a black she-cat."hello, I'm Ravenflight. " she said.A gray-ish she-cat padded in. " Flameclaw! Your 'visitor' is awake. " she said. Ravenflight moved towards the edge of the den. " Turtleshell, don't hurt me." she whimpered. Turtleshell shook her head. " I won't hurt you today, daughter of Piestar. " said Turtleshell. Turtleshell, Ravenpaw? Then a huge red tabby walked in. " Flagstar, everybody else in here, leave! " yelled the tom. " Flameclaw, why are you here? " Flagstar asked, snarling. " I have a simple question. Where is my mate? " Flameclaw snarled. " At my camp, too afraid to return. " Said Flagstar. " No she isn't! " Yelled Flameclaw. " YES SHE IS SON! " yelled Flagstar. Flameclaw snarled. " I'M NOT YOUR SON! " He yelled. " YES YOU ARE! " Flagstar said. " How? " asked Flameclaw. " I met your mother, Pride on a border patrol and we kept on meeting, soon she was expecting my kits and had you, she died and Sharp raised you. " Flagstar said. Flameclaw looked at him." Please, father, tell me one more thing, why didn't you raise me?' asked Flameclaw. " Even I make mistakes. " He said. Flameclaw sighed and let him leave.

Comments (400)


45 days ago
can you not? like we were all under 13 when we made this THREE YEARS AGO! So don't shame on what we worked really hard on because you feel bad about yourself. And to all the people who actually liked these, I'm very sorry they didn't go on. We had like, a three year plan that fell apart mostly due to personal issues.
83 days ago
Cra-ppy names don't get why people like this
112 days ago
Also... Allthetestclan ? Its awesome ! Im a big fan of ur fanfictions !!!!!!
118 days ago
U-U... This is just a SUPER GOOD book.... And im calm(im not) *Spins while slapping mousebrains who doesnt read this PURRfect book*
203 days ago
344 days ago
has flagpost ever mentioned someone named kesley with a last name that started with a h
413 days ago
Flagpost- :o YOU'RE ALIVE???? 🍦 HAPPENED???
424 days ago
Good story btw
I’m actually creating one myslef
424 days ago
I had to change my name for this XD
471 days ago
I laughed so hard at allthetestclan!
616 days ago
well hello my sussy bakas
725 days ago
807 days ago
... Flagpost is officially ded
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896 days ago
*in a tree yawning and then falls down* Hisss!
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946 days ago
Yes UvU That was PURRfect.
952 days ago
lol. Amazing