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Chasing The Sun Chapter Thirteen

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    Jake slid out of camp. A dark cloud was in the sky saying ‘Rain soon, stay away ’ He lifted his head and sighed. Pawsteps startled him. ” Firepaw! ” He said. ” Finally, I get noticed.”Firepaw said in an annoyed voice. ” Well if you behaved maybe we would talk to you. ” Jake said. ” Ha! Like I would! ” Firepaw exclaimed. Panicked voices came from the bushes. ” He was right there and a brown tabby leaped at him! ” said a cat. ” Well Flagstar, he isn’t the first Flameclaw took. ” said another voice. ” Henry, why don’t you understand? Snowcanary is there! She will kill you if you lead the rescue party! ” snarled Flagstar. ” Fine, then you will lead it. ” said Henry. ” I will not lead a patrol into my own son’s camp! ” yelled Flagstar. ” Son? ” whispered Firepaw. ” Flagstar did I hear you right? Did you say son? ” asked Henry. ” Please don’t tell anybody. ” said Flagstar. Jake saw Firepaw race to camp. Jake saw Henry fall under the claws of a red tabby tom. He looked like Flameclaw but was Firepaw’s age.” Get off! ” Yelled Flagstar, slashing the cat’s face. The tom yelled in pain and ran. Jake followed Flagstar and Henry to camp. The Clan saw Flagstar and snarled at him. ” Why didn’t you tell us? ” snarled Clearsight. ” About what? ” Flagstar asked. ” Flameclaw. ”

Comments (339)

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Yesterday
WRITE IT!OR I WILL KILL YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMILY!!!*I just watched Hamilton...*
Yesterday
Question Jay are you going to write Eighteen?
Yesterday
OwO I got to agree with Jay.....
Yesterday
oooooooop awkward
Yesterday
Father?! Where are you???? O~O
Yesterday
Hello Father. How are you?
3 days ago
Thank you,I',m getting the team to post three chapters today
3 days ago
Okay Flaggy, I'll get right on it. OOPS YOU SAID THAT TWO DAYS AGO. Um, I'll do it quickly? SORRY
5 days ago
DIE FOX DIEEE MR FLAGGY!*Teleport to the last chapter*Kills Flagstar
5 days ago
Also Jay,I don't care,I need it out by tomorrow,just show Jake running back and the Clan training for battle and Mr.Gingerpaw apears and says "Flagstar,History Has its eye on you."
5 days ago
NO!Foxhowl becomes Foxstar!
6 days ago
:3 She must die for her crimes.
6 days ago
May I murder Foxhowl for talking about my father like that and from jumping on him>
6 days ago
That is how much I dislike Flameyboy. HE MURDERED MY KIN WITH DOGS!!! UwU That is unforget able.
6 days ago
:3 I like to pretend that Flameyboy is a huge spider that needs to die. >:3
6 days ago
XD Idk ask Flaggy on Scratch.
6 days ago
WOW OKAY.
first of all FOXHOWL CALM DOWN
second of all WHAT THE HECK HAPPENS IN CHAPTER EIGHTEEEEEEEEN
6 days ago
"EKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK" *Jumps on Flameclaw* "Die Spider Die! Die Spider Die! Die Spider Die!
6 days ago
Hello Allthettests,did you miss me?
6 days ago
FLAMECLAW COMES BACK AT 5:00 PM!EVERYBODY HIDE!