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Chasing The Sun Chapter Thirteen

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    Jake slid out of camp. A dark cloud was in the sky saying ‘Rain soon, stay away ’ He lifted his head and sighed. Pawsteps startled him. ” Firepaw! ” He said. ” Finally, I get noticed.”Firepaw said in an annoyed voice. ” Well if you behaved maybe we would talk to you. ” Jake said. ” Ha! Like I would! ” Firepaw exclaimed. Panicked voices came from the bushes. ” He was right there and a brown tabby leaped at him! ” said a cat. ” Well Flagstar, he isn’t the first Flameclaw took. ” said another voice. ” Henry, why don’t you understand? Snowcanary is there! She will kill you if you lead the rescue party! ” snarled Flagstar. ” Fine, then you will lead it. ” said Henry. ” I will not lead a patrol into my own son’s camp! ” yelled Flagstar. ” Son? ” whispered Firepaw. ” Flagstar did I hear you right? Did you say son? ” asked Henry. ” Please don’t tell anybody. ” said Flagstar. Jake saw Firepaw race to camp. Jake saw Henry fall under the claws of a red tabby tom. He looked like Flameclaw but was Firepaw’s age.” Get off! ” Yelled Flagstar, slashing the cat’s face. The tom yelled in pain and ran. Jake followed Flagstar and Henry to camp. The Clan saw Flagstar and snarled at him. ” Why didn’t you tell us? ” snarled Clearsight. ” About what? ” Flagstar asked. ” Flameclaw. ”

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767 days ago
Also idk if you've seen my not-included section but go here and vote once please :) https://linkto.run/p/65TR6XVQ
767 days ago
I am utterly baffled and confused by what I have read. Also, my device is backed up so it probably saved :) also I can endure pain as long as I don't die xD
767 days ago
*happy noises*Done done done done!Now I need to finish Twenty Three and Prologue from you guys
767 days ago
I also just discovered the want to start putting the chapters together
767 days ago
Can we have CtS out by March,I want Lolly litter #1 not to be born yet,so early to mid March would be a good time.Fox,please tell me you didn't forward the sample to Jay.Jay,no offense,but your part in the sample is really sad and you shouldn't feel the pain of my death twice.
767 days ago
OwO Question don't you have an account that you were writing the stuff on?
767 days ago
That's cool! Also, it was me who broke my tablet (technically I didn't do it because it fell down from my tower for no reason whatsoever so I'm blaming the ghosts) but... all of my books were on there. Split, Sheentail's Journey, everything- if my stuff wasn't backed up then I could have lost all of my writing. ALL OF IT. and if I lost it (I'm pretty sure I didn't) I'm not starting over. That stuff I worked on for almost a YEAR. THIS IS THE PROBLEM WITH TECHNOLOGY!
767 days ago
Sample: Goldennight looked at Silverblaze. "So are we telling a stupid prophecy or not?" Silverblaze hissed. "Oh how you drive me crazy." Goldennight sighed. "Just get Piestar in here all ready!" "Fine!" Goldennight snapped as Piestar appeared out of nowhere. "Did I irrupt something?" Piestar asked."No oh course you didn't!" Silverblaze exclaimed casting a side glance at Goldennight. "Well this is a long prophecy..." Goldennight started. "Just start it!" Silverblaze snapped. "The next leader's kin. One to be leader one to rise again. A identical twin." Goldennight's voice became cold like ice. "Flames shall reign. What’s carved in stone shall break. Flames are in vain.” Silverblaze whispered their voice as cold as Goldennight’s. “A path shall take. Moon’s Fox. Lifes at sake.” Goldennight’s voice cracked. “Flag’s lies shall fall. Lies that made a wall…” Silverblaze’s voice became warm again. “I'm so sorry I blacked out.” Silverblaze and Goldennight mewed at the same time. “I-I think I should go.” Piestar shuttered. “Oh okay. Well come back soon!” Silverblaze called after Piestar. Then Goldennight and Silverblaze started to blicker again. _ ((UvU))
767 days ago
AND I LIVE IN NEXT TO INDIANA
767 days ago
OwO I got 5.3 inches a snow a new recond in my city...
767 days ago
Hey guys,in the state I live in there is like,a foot of snow.AND I LIVE NEXT TO ALABAMA!
767 days ago
Imma write a sample...
767 days ago
OwO Jay who broke it? ((Yes I would love to work on it with you! What if we had two parts? One for a little prophecy for the book and then THE LITTLE CURSE joining the clan UwU then maybe a view from Moonpaw?))
767 days ago
But that's not even the worst part...........
767 days ago
Guys... bad news..... My tablet broke.
767 days ago
Ok noice
767 days ago
I can work with that
768 days ago
niiiiiiiiiiiicccccccccccccccccccce but his name is Ash at the beginning sooo you'll have to start out with that
768 days ago
You can,IDEA!Have Jay learning herbs and something happens!Flamekit is brought to the Clan.the little curse
768 days ago
Hey Foxy we could both do it or you could write it and I could edit :/