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Chasing The Sun Chapter Fifteen

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2 Chapter - 289 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 91 taken- The story is completed

Sliver be mean to Jay.

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Sliverpaw snarled at the gray tom. Flameclaw swatted her away."I had hope that you wouldn't want to kill as much as me!' he yelled. Sliverpaw shrunk away at his harsh words."That's why I named you Sliverpaw. I had a sliver of hope that you would be better than me." her father snarled. Flameclaw lifted the tom and brought him to camp.
Daisyleg ran over to him. "WHAT DID YOU DO!" she snarled at Flameclaw."I did it."Sliverpaw said. "WHAT!" yelled Daisyleg slashing her face. Sliverpaw shrunk back. Flameclaw stood in front of her." Step.Away.From.Her." snarled Flameclaw.
Sliverpaw flattened herself to the ground. Flameclaw slashed Daisyleg. She fell to the ground."Dad, stop!' Sliverpaw yelled at him. Turtleshell and Swiftclaw left their den and Lavenderkit raced to his mother. " Mommy are you okay?" he wailed. Leopardpaw looked at Sliverpaw. " What happened to JayfeatherBB?" he asked."I attacked him." She whispered weakly.
"Are you okay?" he asked. "I need to speak to Flameclaw." said a red cat with red splotches. "Firepaw..."

Comments (348)

autorenew

17 hours ago
I should have never told her how to copy and paste... TwT
17 hours ago
Okay.... That matter is over with.
17 hours ago
I think it might have been my younger sister who wrote fan-fictions under the name Lynxsight. She really looks up to you Jay. Wait.... So that means.... SHE GOT ON MY COMPUTER!!!!! :O Im going to go get her.
17 hours ago
:D OwO Wait.... So someone is pretending to be you? OwO.
20 hours ago
Cool foxy!
20 hours ago
Hey..... I swear I didn't write that last comment by "me"... I wasn't on here 2 hours ago.
21 hours ago
I might make a Warriors game soon enough. Like from my own code.
21 hours ago
Here is eighteen https://www.allthetests.com/quiz38/quiz/1611075101/Chasing-The-Sun-Chapter-18
22 hours ago
OwO We got another King George XD
3 days ago
WRITE IT!OR I WILL KILL YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMILY!!!*I just watched Hamilton...*
3 days ago
Question Jay are you going to write Eighteen?
3 days ago
OwO I got to agree with Jay.....
3 days ago
oooooooop awkward
3 days ago
Father?! Where are you???? O~O
3 days ago
Hello Father. How are you?
4 days ago
Thank you,I',m getting the team to post three chapters today
4 days ago
Okay Flaggy, I'll get right on it. OOPS YOU SAID THAT TWO DAYS AGO. Um, I'll do it quickly? SORRY
6 days ago
DIE FOX DIEEE MR FLAGGY!*Teleport to the last chapter*Kills Flagstar
7 days ago
Also Jay,I don't care,I need it out by tomorrow,just show Jake running back and the Clan training for battle and Mr.Gingerpaw apears and says "Flagstar,History Has its eye on you."
7 days ago
NO!Foxhowl becomes Foxstar!