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Chasing the Sun Chapter Sixteen

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Why do I got to do a summary Allthetests?

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Foxkit looked over the AllthetestsClan camp. She saw a pelt of golden fur. There's Flagstar. Foxkit thought. Foxkit shook her head and turned to the two kits she found. They looked so much like StarClan... "Vixen and Amber come on. Let's get you to my Clan's camp." Foxkit mewed. Both of the she-cats had light-colored pelts. Vixen's light ginger pelt stood out too well. Amber's pelt was a soft light orange. Her amber eyes looked at Foxkit with joy. Vixen's amber eyes stared at Amber with love. When Foxkit asked the two one moon earlier if they were kin they said no. Foxkit shakes the feeling of not being welcomed back into AllthetestsClan. She was near 12 moons old now. Surely she would be welcomed back into the clan. Wasn't she? Foxkit thought. Foxkit walked down the hill they were resting on. Vixen and Amber followed behind. Foxkit walked into the camp her head held high. Vixen and Amber tumbled in after her. Flagstar's head turned to Foxkit. "Who are you?" His voice came out as a hiss. "I'm Foxkit. Flagstar don't you remember me?" Foxkit mewed blinking. "Foxkit?" Flagstar's voice went low. "But didn't you leave?" "Yes I did but I found these kits and choose to come back." Foxkit's tail flicked towards Vixen and Amber. A ghostly she-cat was besides Foxkit. The she-cat was crying over what looked like an older Vixen. But she was younger than Vixen herself. Foxkit blinked to find everyone staring at her. "Are you okay Foxkit?" Vixen mewed staring into Foxkit's amber eyes. "Yes. I'm fine." Foxkit mumbled at Vixen. What was that about? Foxkit wondered. Then shook her head a bit softly. Foxkit stared into Flagstar's tired eyes then smiled. "I'm fine. Everything will be just fine now." Foxkit mewed.

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584 days ago
Can we have CtS out by March,I want Lolly litter #1 not to be born yet,so early to mid March would be a good time.Fox,please tell me you didn't forward the sample to Jay.Jay,no offense,but your part in the sample is really sad and you shouldn't feel the pain of my death twice.
584 days ago
OwO Question don't you have an account that you were writing the stuff on?
584 days ago
That's cool! Also, it was me who broke my tablet (technically I didn't do it because it fell down from my tower for no reason whatsoever so I'm blaming the ghosts) but... all of my books were on there. Split, Sheentail's Journey, everything- if my stuff wasn't backed up then I could have lost all of my writing. ALL OF IT. and if I lost it (I'm pretty sure I didn't) I'm not starting over. That stuff I worked on for almost a YEAR. THIS IS THE PROBLEM WITH TECHNOLOGY!
584 days ago
Sample: Goldennight looked at Silverblaze. "So are we telling a stupid prophecy or not?" Silverblaze hissed. "Oh how you drive me crazy." Goldennight sighed. "Just get Piestar in here all ready!" "Fine!" Goldennight snapped as Piestar appeared out of nowhere. "Did I irrupt something?" Piestar asked."No oh course you didn't!" Silverblaze exclaimed casting a side glance at Goldennight. "Well this is a long prophecy..." Goldennight started. "Just start it!" Silverblaze snapped. "The next leader's kin. One to be leader one to rise again. A identical twin." Goldennight's voice became cold like ice. "Flames shall reign. What’s carved in stone shall break. Flames are in vain.” Silverblaze whispered their voice as cold as Goldennight’s. “A path shall take. Moon’s Fox. Lifes at sake.” Goldennight’s voice cracked. “Flag’s lies shall fall. Lies that made a wall…” Silverblaze’s voice became warm again. “I'm so sorry I blacked out.” Silverblaze and Goldennight mewed at the same time. “I-I think I should go.” Piestar shuttered. “Oh okay. Well come back soon!” Silverblaze called after Piestar. Then Goldennight and Silverblaze started to blicker again. _ ((UvU))
584 days ago
AND I LIVE IN NEXT TO INDIANA
584 days ago
OwO I got 5.3 inches a snow a new recond in my city...
584 days ago
Hey guys,in the state I live in there is like,a foot of snow.AND I LIVE NEXT TO ALABAMA!
584 days ago
Imma write a sample...
584 days ago
OwO Jay who broke it? ((Yes I would love to work on it with you! What if we had two parts? One for a little prophecy for the book and then THE LITTLE CURSE joining the clan UwU then maybe a view from Moonpaw?))
584 days ago
But that's not even the worst part...........
584 days ago
Guys... bad news..... My tablet broke.
584 days ago
Ok noice
584 days ago
I can work with that
585 days ago
niiiiiiiiiiiicccccccccccccccccccce but his name is Ash at the beginning sooo you'll have to start out with that
585 days ago
You can,IDEA!Have Jay learning herbs and something happens!Flamekit is brought to the Clan.the little curse
585 days ago
Hey Foxy we could both do it or you could write it and I could edit :/
585 days ago
Could I write a prolouge for Chasing the Sun??? Pleaseeeeeeeeeee *does puppy eyes*
585 days ago
ha https://blogclan.katecary.co.uk/warriors -fan-fiction/#comment-1041881
585 days ago
oh ok I'll read it
586 days ago
Just incase you want to read it here is Flagstar's Coice https://blogclan.katecary.co.uk/warriors -fan-fiction/#comment-1040760