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JayfeatherBB's Heart

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10 Chapter - 2.241 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 331 taken- The story is completed

Took so long to make! The freedom of finally finishing it, the sadness of having to write so many more.

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Prologue Jayfeather sat next to Briarlight. Their son and daughters curled up under Briarlight’s chin.” Jayfeatherkit, Splashkit, Shinekit, and Fa
Prologue
Jayfeather sat next to Briarlight. Their son and daughters curled up under Briarlight’s chin.” Jayfeatherkit, Splashkit, Shinekit, and Falconkit.” she named them.
Jayfeather chuckled. Though he couldn’t see his kits he knew that they were perfect. He heard pawsteps and smelled Bramblestar. Squirrelflight was next to him.
(Seven moons later)
Jayfeatherpaw looked across the wide field. He was far away from his family in ThunderClan.He saw a sun gold tom with sky blue eyes running forwards.” Hi! I’m Flagpaw, the Medicine Cat apprentice.” he said.
A night black tom was walking to him.” I’m the Medicine Cat, Shadeberry.” said the tom.”I’m Jayfeatherpaw.”

Comments (8)

autorenew

27 days ago
Le me do that.I have to write like,a hundred things in a week.*Turns on Non-Stop from Hamilton*"Why do you write like you're running out of time?"
30 days ago
Flaggy has you checked my not-included? The last one is important
38 days ago
you are flameclaw so does it really matter?
41 days ago
Think Flameclaw is.I need to check
41 days ago
Sooooooo who is writing Nineteen of Chasing the sun?
43 days ago
Okay,I think I've said this before,but Luv gets Chapter Five of next book,I'm putting a lot of trust into her writing,considering this is the most plot filled chapter
44 days ago
Yeah, she just wanted to make the chasing the sun chapter and see if it was cool. Like, for maybe only one of the chapters of chasing the sun.
44 days ago
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