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JayfeatherBB's Heart

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10 Chapter - 2.241 Words - Developed by:
- Developed on: - 765 taken- The story is completed

Took so long to make! The freedom of finally finishing it, the sadness of having to write so many more.

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Prologue Jayfeather sat next to Briarlight. Their son and daughters curled up under Briarlight’s chin.” Jayfeatherkit, Splashkit, Shinekit, and Fa
Prologue
Jayfeather sat next to Briarlight. Their son and daughters curled up under Briarlight’s chin.” Jayfeatherkit, Splashkit, Shinekit, and Falconkit.” she named them.
Jayfeather chuckled. Though he couldn’t see his kits he knew that they were perfect. He heard pawsteps and smelled Bramblestar. Squirrelflight was next to him.
(Seven moons later)
Jayfeatherpaw looked across the wide field. He was far away from his family in ThunderClan.He saw a sun gold tom with sky blue eyes running forwards.” Hi! I’m Flagpaw, the Medicine Cat apprentice.” he said.
A night black tom was walking to him.” I’m the Medicine Cat, Shadeberry.” said the tom.”I’m Jayfeatherpaw.”

Comments (14)

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846 days ago
And fyi i hope u do not mind but u r A.W.E.S.O.M.E and i am your very 1# BIGGEST FAN!!!! no matter what anyone else says! i am ur number one fan!!!!!
846 days ago
HEy u guys again I can not get enough of ur stuffff!! Can check out my book sunhatch and the prophacey.
849 days ago
i know this took you so long but it was so worth it! it it awesome! i just loved it!
875 days ago
I enjoyed it! This was really good and I liked the backstory. Also, Tsunami, I don't know about the last one, but if I had to guess (The author should answer, this is just a guess), it's because JayfeatherBB's warrior/kit name would be Jayfeatherkit. Just a guess.
877 days ago
Wait if Flag evil or not. Who killed Lionstar? How could Jayfeather and Brirlight have kits? Why would it be Jayfeatherkit an dnot Jaykit? I DON'T UNDERSTAND
968 days ago
A.W.S.O.M.E
I hope u dont mind but: JayfeatherBB I am ur #1 biggest fan amd I LUV wut u make! Its INCONCEVEABLE!!!
1032 days ago
Le me do that.I have to write like,a hundred things in a week.*Turns on Non-Stop from Hamilton*"Why do you write like you're running out of time?"
1035 days ago
Flaggy has you checked my not-included? The last one is important
1043 days ago
you are flameclaw so does it really matter?
1046 days ago
Think Flameclaw is.I need to check
1046 days ago
Sooooooo who is writing Nineteen of Chasing the sun?
1048 days ago
Okay,I think I've said this before,but Luv gets Chapter Five of next book,I'm putting a lot of trust into her writing,considering this is the most plot filled chapter
1049 days ago
Yeah, she just wanted to make the chasing the sun chapter and see if it was cool. Like, for maybe only one of the chapters of chasing the sun.
1049 days ago
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