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Chasing The Sun Chapter Eighteen

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There was a rustling in the ferns as Jake plunged out of them. JayfeatherBB was limping around and he saw the tom. "I'm not going to ask any questions." He sighed, but then continued. "Sliverpaw says I've betrayed my Clan anyways." He sounded bashful.
Jake breathed heavily but then ran off.
The apprentices were battle training in the clearing, JayfeatherBB watching them while their mentors were off hunting.
Sliverpaw looked as if she were having fun, and just as Flagstar came up to the session to see to his apprentice, there was a clap of thunder above.
It nearly scared JayfeatherBB out of his fur, but Flagstar pressed a reassuring pelt against his.
After, the golden tom pulled away with a disgusted glance. He had just remembered that his old friend was a "traitor" and was meeting on the border with Flamestar. Flagstar trotted up to Sliverpaw and patted her on the head.
Flagstar cleared his throat. "So, what have you little apprentices learned today?" The next part of what he said was drowned out by another boom of thunder.
Sliverpaw whimpered and Flagstar seemed to realize something.
"Where's Gingerpaw?" JayfeatherBB asked for him, wanting to revitalize the bonds they'd once had. "I'm sure he was here a moment ago."
Suddenly, the apprentice crept out of the shrubs with narrowed eyes, staring straight at Flagstar. His pelt rippled and he looked suspiciously at his leader. "Flagstar, history has its eye on you."

Comments (405)

autorenew

5 hours ago
XDDD I just read this
8 hours ago
I ALREADY FRICKING DID
10 hours ago
YOU GUYS NEED TO CHECK ME AND LUV'S SCRATCH PROFILES 😛
12 hours ago
Okay guys I need help writing the first book of my series I'm working fast. So could we do what we did for Chasing the Sun? Jay you can tell Luv that she can write the second chapter of it if she wants. :)
12 hours ago
WELL FRICK THEM CHEATERS!!! I ONLY BUILD AND GATHER STUFF IN CREAVITE FOR SURIVAL BUT I DON'T CHEAT TO BEAT THE GAME!
4 days ago
Ok my brother is playing Minecraft and he got a bunch of diamond stuff and tools and swords and armor and enchanted stuff and then he went into the Nether to look for ancient debris- and he is looking for it IN CREATIVE to say he found it in survival. Then he is going into survival again before he mines it so he can get the acient debris xD then he is going to fight the ender dragon in survival with his gear that he got in CREATIVE and he thinks it counts as BEATING THE GAME XD
6 days ago
finally we hit 400 xD
7 days ago
Oh oof
7 days ago
I legitimately don't know what to respond with.
7 days ago
:O
7 days ago
.................. no comment
8 days ago
Flags what the Sample I wrote was before the whole series started! No pain of death UvU
9 days ago
Yes we are UwU
9 days ago
Wow,we are super inactive
10 days ago
Ugg.
Me: Hey parents, my 3-foot-long hair is kinda high-maintenance, I wanna cut it short and dye it a different color, kinda subtle.
Parents: Oh, oki!
Me: But I can't dye it because last time it didnt show up, and mom said I can't bleach it
Parents: Oh, we did it at home we won't need bleach. We can just go to a professional studio and get it done.
Me: If you say so
*Month later*
Me: *still has super long hair that i dont wanna brush at all and still not dyed*
10 days ago
nice!!!! I'm glad we're all more active now
10 days ago
ALMOST DONE!Like,one more sentence
11 days ago
Also idk if you've seen my not-included section but go here and vote once please :) https://linkto.run/p/65TR6XVQ
11 days ago
I am utterly baffled and confused by what I have read. Also, my device is backed up so it probably saved :) also I can endure pain as long as I don't die xD
11 days ago
*happy noises*Done done done done!Now I need to finish Twenty Three and Prologue from you guys