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Is your Warrior Cats OC a Mary/Gary Sue?

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    What pelt colour does your OC have?

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autorenew

13 days ago
Alright, heres my oc.

Rye is a former loner, who lived in a barn. He was seen as a pest and was poisoned and left to die.
While stumbling through the forest, a shadowclan patrol came across him and took pity on him. After all, he was 7 moons old.

He is a light sandy colour tabby with thick fur and amber eyes.
Hes timid and a quick thinker.
14 days ago
'AND I AM BACK WITH MY THIRD OC!! (this is Weasel'star and Dotted'Field 's owner speaking)
Name: Ghost'Mask
Why They Were Named That: Ghost: ghost was born during winter, and due to his pelt beng mostly white he looked a bit like a ghost in the snow - Mask: he has a grey mask on his face
Gender: Tom
Age: 39 moons
Rank: warrior
Clan: thunderclan
Appearance: a white tom with a grey mask, and grey spots on his body and legs, his tail is a grdient from white to dark-grey. He has blue eyes, and a scar on his left (blind) eye
Personality: a calm and friendly cat who would never judge his friends for what they did
Likes: sun-bathing, hunting, training his apprentice (Tatterd'Paw), and spending time with friends
Dislikes: rouges, cats who lie, rude cats, and fish
Skills: this tom is a very skilled hunter, but also someone some cats ask for advice due to him being honest.
Strengths: He is very skilled in rocky terain during a fight, especially during winter due to his white fur
Weaknesses: since he's blind on his left, he will be more vounrable if you attack him on the left
Family: Mom: Petal'Tail > a white she-cat with a grey mask and grey spots on her fur and soft amber eyes - Dad : Blizzard'Scowl > a tuxedo tom with piercing blue eyes
Friends: Soot'WIng > a light brown tom with a long muzzle and stuc tail, with green eyes - Sorrel'Snap > a tabby tom with a thick pelt and brown eyes
Enemies: Needle'Spike > a grey tom with spiky fur and amber eyes
Apprentices: Tatterd'Paw > a friendly and energetic she-cat who has a missing bak left leg, who was supposed to become the medicin apprentice, but after showing how much she hated it Ghost started training her
Backstory: Ghost'kit was born into thunder clan during the rein of Sharp'Star, as he grew up with SOrrel'kit, who was the same age as him. When ghost became a apprentice he met a kitty-pet named Timmy, who he quickly befriended. After a while Timmy wished to join thunder clan and after some trials and proving his worth, he was accepted into thunder clan and became Soot'Paw. Shortly after ghost went hunting with his friends, alone to prove they where able to be warriors. But tragety struck and ghost got blinded in his left eye due to a rabbit he tried to catch. The 3 apprentices where scolded for their actions but later on did become warriors. Ghost and his friends are now just living happilkky in Thunderclan, with their new leader Dripping'Star
19 days ago
Can I even comment here..?
109 days ago
I think she got an ok but I could have done better she got 42%
I guess I should tell you about her cause I kind of want to ok
Name : Darkflame (duh lol)
Rank: Warrior
Mate(s): Dappledclover( dead), Thrushwing
Sons: Sleetscar and Flamecloud
Daughter: Flareear
Mother: Tanfoot(dead)
Father: Scarletface(dead)
Description: a smoky black-gray she-cat with pinkish-white ears, swirly stripes, and tail tip
Personality: very self-conscious, shy, has anxiety, affected easily, but quite kind
151 days ago
i am happy to say my sewest oc is also not a gary seu, sso lemme tell you about him!
Name: Weaselstar ( Weaselfang )
Rank: leader
fur: a white belly + legs, his shoulders and chest beinng a grey-ish light brown, and has white ear tips,
eyes: a normal bleu
clan: windclan
mate: he hasn't found the love he needs yet.
kits: Branchpaw ( weaselstar adopted him when branch was around 5 moons and found near wc by a patrol.)
sibling(s) : Thornmask (alive), Berryhop ( dead; fox attack), blazepelt (alive?) (blaze peltt went missing around 6 moons after weasel star became leader.)
apprentice: Weasel has mentored 3 cats now; hollowsong, wildear, and flowerstep. (all alive and well)
personality: this tom is very kind, and put's the lives of his clan mates before his own, but he can be very rude if you get on his bad side.
backstory: Weaselkit was born as a half clan kit along with berrykit, he and his siter grew very close, but the young kit always followed his oldest brothers; Thornpaw, and blazepaw around where ever he could, when weasel became a apprentice, he trained under a respected warrior named Halftail, and they grew a sort of father and son relationship as weaselpaw grew up without one, weaselpaw got his name weaselfang deu to the fact when in cmbat he used his speed to supride his enem with a throat bite. After becoming deputy, he sadly lost his sister berryhop to a fox attack, and promised to never let a cat die deu to foxes ever again. And after he became leader, he adopted a young and abandond kit named branch, but sadly after a while weaselstar's brother blazemask vannished. This hit weasel hard, but with thornmask still by his side,. Weaselstar will make sure windclan stays safe.
/ disclaimer, please do not take my oc, you may base of of them, but dont only change the name or rank! ty. \
177 days ago
my oc =
Name: Dottedfield
Rank: medicin cat
fur: tortise shell
eyes: bright blue
clan: windclan
mate: Nah! This guy stays loyale to his code.
kits: he was close to adopting a abandond kit that no queen would take, but the deputy decided to take the kit insted. (kits name was Hollow, yes they where found as a kitty-pet)
sibling(s) : Poppypaw (died to a monster)
apprentice? : he hasn't found one he finds is up for the job yet.
Personality: He's a kind, butsacrastic tom who is able to know what you're feeling by just looking at you're expression!
backstory: Dottedkit was born in tc and loved it there, but the young kit loved visiting the medicin cat;s den, and as he became a app the medicin cat found him up for the job. Dottedpaw trained hard, but sadly his twin sister passed away to a monster. Dottedpaw was horrified by this and barely slept, but his friends Adderpaw, and Snailpaw helped him. When his mentor died he took over gaining the name Dottedfield, and became a respected medicin cat.
/side note; please don't take my oc- you may base of of him, but don't fully copy and just change the name!\
238 days ago
My other oc, Wildspirit is alsonot an Mary sue
238 days ago
My oc is:
Name:Twistheart/star
Rank:leader
Fur: silver tabby
Eyes: grey
Clan: Riverclan/Fallclan
Mate: Dusktail
Kits: Timmy(kittypet), Glowwing, Dragongem, and Spiritleaf.
Mom: Yellowwish
Dad: Snowclaw
Siblings: brother, Blackwing
Apprentices: Eagleclaw, Branchpaw(died:( ), Bounceflight and Gemheart.

She left Riverclan to make her own clan, Fallclan. She is not an Mary sue...
325 days ago
Here are my 2 OC's:
Name: Heartflight
Rank: Warrior
Pelt: Black+white with pale green eyes
Parents: Honeynose (see Mothberry's mom), Paledew (see Mothberry's dad)
Temprament: Calm, quiet, shy, peaceful
Mate: Gina (stray cat/rogue)
Kits: Slashpaw, unnamed she kit)
Apprentice: Sugarpaw
Cause of death: Alive
350 days ago
I tried it again for a different OC of mine, Jayheart, and it said i should be happy with what i created!:D Description: Gray with white legs and tail, tail tip is gray, very long tail, light blue eyes. Personality: Clumsy, very shy around cats he barely knows, bad warrior, kind dumb to be honest, though a big- hearted cat around the ones he loves, and sympathetic. Littermates: Beebuzz, and Lilypetal. Cause of death: Lilypetal killed him. (Geez i'm glad i don't have you as a sibling, Lilypetal.) Rank: Warrior. Mates: Amberlion (That's the reason Lilypetal killed him, he had a mate outside WindClan.) Kits: Creamykit(Snow), Dovekit(Light). Backstory: He was always a terrible warrior, and the reason he didn't become a Med. cat is his littermate, Beebuzz already was a Med. cat, with her mentor, Birchbark, and was often bullied by how weak he was.
351 days ago
Yay it said my main character has a good balance!:D Name: Springbloom (Nickname Violetfur.) Description: Small brown she-cat with a slightly longer tail. Violets stuck in her fur, light green eyes. Important losses to her: Her mother, Wolfpelt. Personality: Self conscious, short-tempered, though caring for her family and, friends. Cats who romantically love her. Sagestar has a crush on her. Rank: Med. cat. Mates: None. Kits: None Clan: WindClan. Backstory: StarClan wanted her to become a warrior, but when she became a Med. cat, StarClan killed her mother, Wolfpelt, and when that happened Springbloom felt guilty, and was ashamed of herself.
359 days ago
Yes RavenFeather ain’t a Gary sue!!

Imma give some info cause why not

Name:RavenFeather
Clan:Skyclan
Rank:warrior
Mate:WindStar
Kits:FawnKit, BlackKit, DuskKit

He is a horrible hunter but is amazing at fighting cause he walks so loudly prey here’s him from a mile away
385 days ago
YESSSSS ALL MY FANFIC CHARACTERS ARE NOT MARY SUES!!!!!!!!!!!
385 days ago
Maplewing, Goldenfang’s sister, is not a Mary Sue either!
407 days ago
Yesssss my OC is not a Mary Sue!
Name: Goldenfang
Gender: She-cat
Pelt: Golden tabby
Ranks Had In Life: Kit, Apprentice, Warrior, Queen, Deputy, Leader
Age Lived: 0-97 moons
Clan: LakeClan (a made up clan)
Favorite prey: Birds and fish
Mother: Stormcloud (went to MoonClan, a version of dark forest)
Father: Cinderfang (still alive but will go to SunClan, a version of StarClan)
Sister: Maplewing
Mate: Blackheart
Kits: Flamekit and Firekit
Strength: 4/5
Intelligence: 5/5
Speed: 5/5
Loyalty: 3/5
Attack Power: 5/5
Defense Power: 2/5
Biggest Fear: Losing her sister, Maplewing
Power: Speaking to foxes, badgers, and dogs (its part of a prophecy)
407 days ago
LOL I did the test for Firestar and it said he’s almost Gary Stu oh no!!
411 days ago
Name: Lilydawn
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Deputy
Clan: SkyClan
Age: 50 moons
Mate: ???
Kits: None
Apperance: Cinnamon Tortoiseshell with Sky-Blue Eyes, and a Bushy Tail
430 days ago
Name: Silverleaf
Gender: She-Cat
Rank: Apprentice med cat
Age: 9 moons
Mate: none
Kits: None
477 days ago
Name: ShadowPelt
Gender: Tom
Rank: med cat
Age: 10-12 moons
Mate: none
Kits: none
Injuries: scar on leg, torn ear
Powers: telepathy
Prophecies: 1papyrus
606 days ago
Name: hazel'cry
Gender: she-cat
Clan: river clan
Appearance: orange tortoisehell
Rank: Nursery helper
Favourite prey: squirrels and rabbits
Traits: gentle, shy, clumsy
???: you are the purest of the pure, full of love and gracefulness that earns your clan mates respect. You do good deeds on a daily basis without expecting anything in return.
Appearance: a combo of light and dark colours with green eyes

Strength: 4/6
Speed: 5/6
Stamina: 6/6
Loyalty: 6/6
Courage: 2/6
Vision: 5/6
Attack: 1/6
Defence: 6/6
Mate: 1
Kits: 4
Flaws: too quiet, soft, and nocturnal
Fear: of losing family and friends