Is your Warrior Cats OC a Mary Sue?

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This is my opinion okay? I got this idea from another user on another website.

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249 days ago
Says she needs a backstory.
But how abt this I made before:>?
Palekit was born to Twilighthaze and Moonshine in Rainbowclan, her littermates Speckledkit, Mudit and fawnkit.
Palepaw was an unusally gifted apprentice, and she was a warrior way sooner than planned, becoming Paleheart.
Paleheart was out hunting, and met a dangerous rouge called Nightmare. They fell in love, and soon she was so dangerously in love with him, they ran away and had a litter of 5 kits, now namely Darkpaw, Mistpaw, Brightpaw, Silverpaw and Spottedpaw. Paleheart and Nightmare ran off with their kits to the ice desert, starclan watching in horror, they started Paleclan, becoming Palestar and Nightflare.
One day, Palestar launched an unprovoked attack on her old clan, and she badly wounded her sister, Speckledpelt, and Took one of the leader's (Lilystar) lives.
Soon into the battle, Her mate was killed with no claw marks on his body, and both deputies were taken.
Then, Starclan came down, and demanded an end to the war. "Unite or die" They said. "All will be lost if you don't end this" They said.
And, leaving the floor stained with blood, they walked away.
Soon after, all cats noticed Palestar become less reckless and irratable, and more loving and passionate.
But, to this day, her mistakes still haunt her...
685 days ago
ohmygosh S p u n k y is not a bad word.
685 days ago
Not sure why it put 🕊y as a bad word.
685 days ago
My OC, Amberleaf, is a pretty gray she-cat with amber eyes. she is the daughter of the RiverClan leader, Silverstar, and she is 💝y and stubborn, but she is smart and loyal and can be kind when she wants to be. Her best friend is Dawnstream, a lovely white she-cat who is blind in one eye. She is kind and caring but can be fierce when she needs to be. Amberleaf is mentor to Honeypaw, and the clan is eventually betrayed by Redpelt, the clan medicine cat. Amberleaf has to save the clan from a new clan, FireClan, that has formed in secret and is now trying to take over the entire forest. Amberleaf eventually turns into AmberStar and Dawnstream has a kit.
897 days ago
Greetings! I'm Swandapple, RiverClan's deputy. I am a she-cat with a mate called Sunwhisker. (A golden tabby tomcat with green eyes. He was formerly from ThunderClan, and Firestar is his ancestor, but is now a loyal Riverclan warrior.) I have silver-grey eyes the color of a rising storm, and a sleek silver pelt with dappled black markings. (Hence the name Swandapple.) I have two kits: Dawnsky, (A muscular silver she-cat with warm green eyes, known for her skill at fishing) and Minnowpaw (A lithe golden tabby she-cat with gray eyes.) In terms of personality, I'm known for being strong-willed, but smart as a whip and an excellent fighter, but am not quick to forget past grudges or grievances. I eventually become clan leader and lead RiverClan to glory.

Also please don't copy OC. Thx :)

914 days ago
Sootdream is cool by the way
914 days ago
Featherkit accidentally
brick clan Lore by Being born a half-clan if that counts :/
914 days ago
But that's not interesting :/
914 days ago
So featherkit doesn't have an interesting backstory. Of course not, she's only a kit for starclan's sake! Although, she is a half-clan. She doesn't know that yet though.
Oh ye and there's something that happened with Eagleheart and Sunsetstrike but it hasn't got to the good bit yet...;)
929 days ago
yeah, he doesnt have an interesting backstory lol. that isnt really important though, as its the presetnt that matters in my story :)
972 days ago
She needs a more interesting backstory you say? Here is her backstory. She was originally from BloodClan but her and her siblings ran away after their sister died of starvation since there was a food shortage, Sootdream passed out in the middle of the forest since she didn’t have a lot of energy and was found by ThunderClan and is still being hunted by BloodClan. But, yeah that’s TOTALLY NOTinteresting. -_-
1037 days ago
I did not create this character I am just creating a backstory for Hawkheart (evil med cat, killed Moonflower?) in my theory, Daisytoe (Moonflower's mother) killed Hawkheart's sister Grasspaw, so now he hates Thunderclan. Then, Chiveclaw (med cat before Hawkheart) forced him to become a medicine cat because he was told by StarClan that Hawkheart would destroy WindClan if he didn't become a medicine cat. Hawkheart was very unhappy being a medicine cat, and he was hungry for blood and vengeance. So, when a cat that looks JUST LIKE the one that killed Grasspaw starts stealing his herb store? He kills her. OBVIOUSLY. Now he is the least crazy cat in the dark forest and is sad because Grasspaw is in StarClan and he misses her. Sorry if you hate Hawkheart, I just don't hate him...
1041 days ago
Also, please don't copy my story. Thank you!
1041 days ago
My oc, Loneheart, is pretty well developed. But nOoOOo I need a more interesting backstory than most of the people she loved died! Her mother, of a heart attack, her father, of shock, her littermates, of poisoned milk from their foster mother, and her foster mother, which of whom was mean to Loneheart before she died, and she died of a talon that she accidently ate from a eagle she ate. So... yeah.
1056 days ago
BTW Mothberry is now Mothstar!
1062 days ago
Yay! This is ONE of my 1st OC's Mothberry. If you don't know her yet she is ginger w/ green eyes and was caputered by Twolegs and she is Creekclan deputy now.
1081 days ago
It said this to me ""Your character is not a Mary Sue. its quite original but not the best it could be. Try making an interesting backstory for the character"". My character is not a mary sue but not well developed.
1085 days ago
Try making a better backstory for your character:D Um.... you hardly said anything about that department at all. You didn't let me tell you that when Springbloom lost her mother she hated herself, and also StarClan wished her to become a warrior but when she became a Med. cat StarClan wanted her dead.(Story plot completely open to anyone:)
1207 days ago
My of isn't a Mary Sue!!!