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The feild trip

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1 Chapter - 227 Words - Developed by: Tori:-) - Updated on: 2012-06-15 - Developed on: - 1.094 taken- The story is currently being written

This girl, ME, goes on a feild trip. Unforthenetly, I'm paired up with the school bully! Will I live?

ps. i got a 4 on this story @ school.


Once, my teacher said, "Class! We're going on a feild trip!" I was paired up with a bully.
When I got there, I felt the warm sand between my toes. I heard the other kids shouting. Suddenly, Emma, the bully pushed me into the water. I tried to swim, but I couldn't. Finally, I got out. Emma said she was sorry and told me why she was a bully. On the bus back to school, some kids were teasing Emma. I shouted,"She can't help it!" The bus driver stopped. I went on and on about how she wasn't trying to be mean. Afterward, we all decited to be friends.
PS: this is a short version of my A+ story, the origanal was 5 pages!

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