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Warrior Cats Fanfic: Loner`s Quest (Part 1)

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HI! THIS IS MY FIRST EVER FANFIC AND IT IS MY BEST EFFORT! I HOPE TO PRODUCE EVEN BETTER FANFICTION IN THE FUTURE! UNTIL THEN, PLEASE ENJOY THIS!

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The loner stalked through the tall grass. She was downwind of the rabbit. Her ears pricked, she charged straight at it and chased it over a ridge. The rabbit darted into a clump of heather. She caught it, then stopped to look around. She was on Clan territory!

Comments (7)

autorenew

219 days ago
This is good writing but definitely write more for each chapter, or do a lot more chapters. Overall there was about 12 sentences in the whole thing, 4 in each chapter. I would have liked it even more than I do now if it was longer . Otherwise amazing AMAZING Amazing Job! Clap from me
233 days ago
You are going to have too write some more.
267 days ago
Is that true, Philip P. Huberton? Because I find it hard to believe.
294 days ago
Write more pls! It is amazing
459 days ago
Write more! Write more!
890 days ago
As a PhD professor from Yale I believe your story is incredible and I'm patiently awaiting more!
1313 days ago
The chapters need to be a lot longer. I recomend you make like fifty chapters if their going to be that short. But it's really good otherwise.