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Hermione's bloody love triangle

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3 Chapter - 682 Words - Developed by: Adrianna lake - Updated on: 2018-03-16 - Developed on: - 794 taken- The story is currently being written

Dramione? Heron? Find out in this love triangle

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I walked into the library and someone whispered my name. I heard it again. Then a cold hand grabbed me. I was kissing someone. He was cold. He wrapped his arms around me and I felt his hair. It was long, but neat. It wasn't until I felt the snake pin on his robes I realized that it was Draco Malfoy! He smelled. Kinda weird, too.. like... no.... not that... any way, he suddenly jerked away and said "I love you Hermione!" And ran. I was thinking about it a while later when Ron comes up to me. He says " Hermione..... do you... like... me?" "Umm..... well....yeah Ron." "Will...you... go on a date with me?" "Yea sure!" So at 5:00 we walked to Hogsmade and then when we visited the park, he kissed me. It was sweet. -Not as good as Draco...- I think and then I see him. Fresh from the florist with a bouquet of flowers with my name on it. His eyes welled with tears and he ran away. What on earth had I gotten myself into?

Comments (9)

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Adrianna (53207)
41 days ago
Oh hey emily/rebel! I see you have been reading all my work😁 yeah, I have thought of making the parts longer, by with things wrappings up, it would be pointless
Emily/Rebel (86367)
41 days ago
its GREAT, but it could use more than 3 chapters, but other than that it excellent.
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GryffindorChaser (31022)
146 days ago
It is good, but I agree with Mary on the grammar thing. You might want to download Grammarly, a free app that corrects your grammar mistakes--even online if you get the extension for it.
Mary (50844)
213 days ago
Great Job! But make sure to work on your Grammar.
Adrianna (53207)
220 days ago
Okay!!! I will try to do that next time😁
GryffindorChaser (01320)
221 days ago
Sorry, I meant to write Adrianna Lake. That was a typo.
GryffindorChaser (01320)
221 days ago
Hi, this is the author of Dramione: Just the Beginning. Arianna Lake, I would love you to read it because we are both Dramione fanfic writers. I liked this story, but I just wish that it was a little longer. I understand that you have more chapters, but I still would love it even more than I already do if you could lengthen the next chapters that you write.
Adrianna (53207)
224 days ago
Hey guys!!! So, I was actually inspired to write this by my hero on YouTube, EverythingHP PLEASE check out her channel and comment if you did. (P.s. if it is you, reading this, then please comment!!! I would love to hear from you😁
Adrianna (53207)
233 days ago
Hello!!!! It's me, the author! Thanks for reading my stories and please share the love and comment. I love suggestions!!