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Hermione's bloody love triangle part three, the tables turn

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3 Chapter - 426 Words - Developed by: Adrianna lake - Updated on: 2018-04-05 - Developed on: - 310 taken- The story is currently being written

Mystery chapter! Just read!

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"Sing to me some more!" "Fine, fine, 'Mionie." Good God his voice is even better than his kisses! "Oh, oh dwakie wakie! Sing me a song! Please Hermione. Some of us are studying." „Sorry Ron." I threw him a pleading look. He ignored me. "Malfoy, are you even aloud here?" "Look, Ron.. could we please put the past behind us and move on?" "Move on? MOVE ON? Malfoy, this is the present and all you are just a pretty boy git with a little money. Harry has the same things but has the decency to not steal my girl!" "I'm a pretty boy git? Are we even friends?" "OH, REALLY WEASLEY? ALL YOU ARE IS A BUTTHURT LOSER WITH A CRUMBY HOUSE!" "ALL OF YOU SHUT UP!" "Oh, can it, traitor! All you EVER do is take his side!" "That is not very fair mate. If I can call you that." I ran away crying all of them yelling after me.

Comments (7)

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GryffindorChaser (31022)
7 hours ago
It is good, but I agree with Mary on the grammar thing. You might want to download Grammarly, a free app that corrects your grammar mistakes--even online if you get the extension for it.
Mary (50844)
67 days ago
Great Job! But make sure to work on your Grammar.
Adrianna (53207)
74 days ago
Okay!!! I will try to do that next time😁
GryffindorChaser (01320)
75 days ago
Sorry, I meant to write Adrianna Lake. That was a typo.
GryffindorChaser (01320)
75 days ago
Hi, this is the author of Dramione: Just the Beginning. Arianna Lake, I would love you to read it because we are both Dramione fanfic writers. I liked this story, but I just wish that it was a little longer. I understand that you have more chapters, but I still would love it even more than I already do if you could lengthen the next chapters that you write.
Adrianna (53207)
78 days ago
Hey guys!!! So, I was actually inspired to write this by my hero on YouTube, EverythingHP PLEASE check out her channel and comment if you did. (P.s. if it is you, reading this, then please comment!!! I would love to hear from you😁
Adrianna (53207)
87 days ago
Hello!!!! It's me, the author! Thanks for reading my stories and please share the love and comment. I love suggestions!!