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The Quitradon (chapters 1-6)

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6 Chapter - 1.869 Words - Developed by: ARTZY_RolePlaying_Fangirl - Updated on: 2018-05-25 - Developed on: - 896 taken- The story is currently being written - 7 people like it

Olive and Viv Whitman are two sisters who equally hate their life in the future new York New France. will all that change when they enter The Quitradon a series of tests to get them out of New France for good or will they fail. (sorry the chapters are so short and more will be added this my first published story and I'm too young to get books published but I want to be an author so thanks 4 reading)

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OLIVE (olive) My name is Olivera Whitman and I was born 14 years ago in New France. New France was located were New York city used to be about 250 yea
OLIVE (olive)

My name is Olivera Whitman and I was born 14 years ago in New France. New France was located were New York city used to be about 250 years ago now it’s well… I don’t really know what you would call it is a place where all the worlds amazing technology was absent. We had electricity but no computers or phones we also had pumping water not running, some of the rich people had cars but they were models from around 1920 the rest of us had horse and carriage bike or our shoes. It was a mix of the 1900s all the way to the 1970s but mostly the 20s. 5 years after I knew the world my sister was born and was named Vivian. 3 weeks after that my father was killed in a fire at the factory he worked at. Now we don’t have much money as my mother is a woman so apparently, she “can’t work”. outside New France women worked just as much as men but not here, but we got along, okay. I didn’t look like my mother one bit with her short brown hair and tiny eyes and mouth, I had long red hair, big green eyes and freckles as did my sister, it wasn’t common to have long hair most women had it very short in the city. All and all my life was definitely not what I wanted but I had Viv, and soon the Quitradon so it was ok.

Comments (20)

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ZeDeadBug (19658)
32 days ago
More chapters will be coming out on my wattpad with this name and this site too
R. (32762)
171 days ago
This is great! I can't wait for more chapters. :)
Pup (06967)
171 days ago
Write more cause I LOVE THIS STORY!!! UR a great Authur. Not as good as me but UR okay, dude!
Pam (26716)
174 days ago
Wow! Your going places kid! Keep writing and keep following your dreams. It was fun doing your nails today. Thanks for sharing 😊💅🏻
The Lovley Ravenclaw (83762)
182 days ago
Again, it is amazing how good of an author you are, can’t wait to read more
ARTZY_RolePlaying_FanGirl (54523)
184 days ago
I love that u read this and i think that I’m sorry if I put up an add i just want ppl to read this
ARTZY_RolePlaying_FanGirl (54523)
184 days ago
THANK U MY RECOLOR FRIENDS
KatnissOrHermione (60535)
184 days ago
Mr me good work on encouragement! Top marks for you
KatnissOrHermione (60535)
184 days ago
Hey. This is ✨KatnissOrHermione✨ from ReColour. I saw your picture asking for us to come here so I did. It's truly GREAT. Please tell us when there is more on ReColour.
The Lovley Ravenclaw (97369)
184 days ago
It is amazing I love the story, can’t wait for more, plz tell me when there is more on Recolor, thanks
ARTZY_RolePlaying_FanGirl (19658)
184 days ago
💫🌹A E S T H E T I C 🌹💫 TYSM for reading sorry j asked I just need help
💫🌹A E S T H E T I C🌹💫 (33486)
184 days ago
I Love it!!!!!!
ARTZY_RolePlaying_FanGirl (19658)
184 days ago
Mr me plz bring ur hate else where
Mr me (19658)
184 days ago
This whole story is bad ur abad writer Marcus Bruner or what're er is soooo wrong
Mr me (19658)
185 days ago
Short chapters Ughh this is baddddd...
Marcus Brunner (19658)
185 days ago
This has much potential the scolorship could be yours if you keep up the good work and improve. I assume you know what I mean as we have met and disscued this my best wishes.
The Readers Choice Granma (08954)
185 days ago
it was terrific I love it keep up the goodwork!
Tina Moose (19658)
188 days ago
Good but hard to follow
Olive (19658)
188 days ago
he he my name IS olive and my BFFs name is Vivian LOL GREAT STORY SO FARCANT WIAT 4 NEW CHAPTERS
FanTDM (19658)
188 days ago
this is cool i hope u add the accual fighting in the new chapters