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Her Last Words

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I wrote a short poem about suicide and suicide awareness. Some of these sentences are copied from a song. If you get upset really easy, then don't read this.

    Just a pretty girl,
    always wore a smile,
    but beneath her face,
    she felt like she wasn't worthwhile,
    she hurt herself,
    not caring a bit,
    and if you ask her shell just say that the cat did it,
    she thought nobody cared,
    and that's why she dared,
    to end her life,
    nobody would miss her.

    Soon she hung there,
    body pale and limp,
    with tearstains down her face,
    she was forever gone,
    the world had lost her place.

    When her mother walked,
    walked into her room,
    her face grew pale and she felt it was too soon,
    for her girl to go,
    but she didn't know,
    the pain she felt over a long time.

    She picked up the note,
    with shaking hands,
    tears ran down her face,
    as she read her last words.

    "I'm so sorry mom, I don't know why I live, This world wasn't meant for me to fit in. I gave into grief, because I'm not a fighter, you'll make it through the night, just hug your pillow tighter. But now I've left you now, I cannot take the pain, but yet again, I've left you to see my bloodstains. I'm running out of space, nothing left to cry,

    This is it world,

    Goodbye X

    "I myself am not suicidal, but I needed to publish this to raise awareness of suicide. Thank you. No depressing comments please, I've made myself cry by writing this ;-; Thanks - PurityAngel77

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Comments (6)


77 days ago
Ik!!!!!! Someone was pretending to be me! Srsly why do ppl do this
89 days ago
Purityangel77, Somebody copied this under Thequizzyaddict name!!!!!!
172 days ago
Wait I wrote that 22 days ago not realising that I will myself have suicidal thoughts
194 days ago
Omg this will definitely raise awareness well done
So sad
194 days ago
Then Iโ€™ll be your next commenter. Made me cry ๐Ÿ˜ข ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข
I have my own poem to raise awareness of bullying called This bully
195 days ago
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