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Two Girls In Love

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Two girls, Lola and Beatrice, meet each other at a park and start chatting. Eventually, the fall in love with each other and begin dating. There are some problems along the way. Lola’s parents are VERY homophobic, and Beatrice’s parents just got a divorce, and she didn’t want to give them any more big news to think about. And the girls want to keep their sexuality and the fact that they’re dating a secret. So what happens when they have to announce what’s really going on between them?

Beatrice was taking her little brother, Jake, to the park. He was going crazy at home, and Beatrice couldn’t handle it any longer. The minute they reached the park, Jake ran away, and Beatrice plopped down on one of the many benches. She pulled out her phone and starting texting her boyfriend, Tyler, whom she’d only been dating for a week.
She said “Hi”.
Tyler replied back. “Hey”.
“How are you?”
“I’m good, what about you?”
“I’m ok, I guess. I had to take my brother to the park. Ugh!”
“Ha, fun.”
“Yeah, not really lol.”
“Well anyways, I miss you Beatrice. You’re so beautiful.”
Beatrice paused. She didn’t know what to say. The truth was, she was only dating Tyler because she was super popular and she would’ve felt bad if she had turned him down when he asked her out. So she said yes. But nobody really knew the truth about Beatrice. She wasn’t straight, like everyone thought she was. No.
Beatrice was actually bisexual.

Comments (12)


34 days ago
Kittz_Frenz Ik it doesn’t make sense and is kinda weird at some parts but like I said, I was rushing and didn’t rlly focus on making every part filled with detail. I’m much better at writing stories now, but I just wanted to see how my first one on here would do. And I’m a person too. So even if u don’t like the story, u don’t need to complain. Also, if u didn’t like it, why did u keep reading the whole thing anyway?
109 days ago
Well. Their parents??
109 days ago
Girl: sitting next: ok imma look at chu cuz im gay n stuff

Girl2: oH thats cool im bi. Ur pretty

Girl: u 2

Girl 2: owO

Girl: ok ill break up with my bf and be suth a stranger!!! OwO

Girl 2: OWuuuu who??

Girl: u lol now lets date but idl u but who cares.

207 days ago
I know parts of it don’t make sense, and I’m sorry, I was rushing lol. And I never even finished it, but I don’t know how to go back to make changes. Sorry guys! Lol 😂
224 days ago
I love it! But did they tell their parents??
305 days ago
However I'm confused as to how they like each other as soon as they meet? Why would Beatrice break up with her boyfriend right as she meets somebody else?
305 days ago
I really like this, good job ^^
342 days ago
Wow! This is amazing!
372 days ago
Thank you Raven, I really appreciate your comment!
391 days ago
392 days ago
Great job, Iris! Love the story! You should be a writer!
392 days ago
Best. Story. Ever! I can really relate to it.