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Warrior Cats- TRUST AND REGRET

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5 Chapter - 2.149 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 307 taken- The story is completed - 2 people like it

Hello! I have always wanted to write a warrior cat fiction story, and I have already made up five clans, and a new name for star clan. So this is my first attempt at it and I hope you like the story!

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As Cottonfire paced around the nursery, she heard a huge caterwauling. She raced into the den and to her pleasure found Feathershine standing over a beautiful cream she cat with three kits at her belly. "Oh Rosetail they're wonderful!" meowed Cottonfire. Apparently Rosetail saw the longing in her eyes. "It will be your turn soon enough now. " she stated with a glance at Brakenfall. " You two seem to be getting closer!"
"Yes, we are. But I don't need a mate right now. I have my Clan to look after. Who's going to be deputy when I'm in the nursery caring for kits? My Clan needs me. Not Brakenfall." And with that Cottonfire padded out of the nursery to see how the camp was getting on. All looked well, so she decided to go tell Stormeye about his kits and to see how Daypaws training was going. She walked out of camp to the Training Clearing. She found Stormeye showing Daypaw a fighting move. "Ok. Now it's your turn." Meowed Stormeye. Daypaw raced forward and leaped and twisted onto Stormyes back and jumped off just in time to rake his belly with her paws before he turned on her. " Nice job! " Cottonfire pointed out. " You're going to be a real fighter!" Daypaw whirled around to give Cottonfire a pleased look, before Cottonfire gave Stormeye the news. Just as she opened her mouth, she heard yelling from Grasstail. He had been on the dawn patrol and was now racing towards them. " Help! We're being attacked by foxes!"

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14 days ago
Thank you Cevil! I read your warrior cat fanfic and that's what made me want to write my own!
28 days ago
I know it was only your first but it could have been better.the ending was a little abrupt but I really liked it. Thank You!Enter here your text you want to format
31 days ago
That was really good! It had an interesting plot and I hope other people will comment on it too!