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Warrior Cats- TRUST AND REGRET

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5 Chapter - 2.149 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 3.314 taken- The story is completed - 10 people like it

Hello! I have always wanted to write a warrior cat fiction story, and I have already made up five clans, and a new name for star clan. So this is my first attempt at it and I hope you like the story!

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As Cottonfire paced around the nursery, she heard a huge caterwauling. She raced into the den and to her pleasure found Feathershine standing over a beautiful cream she cat with three kits at her belly. "Oh Rosetail they're wonderful!" meowed Cottonfire. Apparently Rosetail saw the longing in her eyes. "It will be your turn soon enough now. " she stated with a glance at Brakenfall. " You two seem to be getting closer!"
"Yes, we are. But I don't need a mate right now. I have my Clan to look after. Who's going to be deputy when I'm in the nursery caring for kits? My Clan needs me. Not Brakenfall." And with that Cottonfire padded out of the nursery to see how the camp was getting on. All looked well, so she decided to go tell Stormeye about his kits and to see how Daypaws training was going. She walked out of camp to the Training Clearing. She found Stormeye showing Daypaw a fighting move. "Ok. Now it's your turn." Meowed Stormeye. Daypaw raced forward and leaped and twisted onto Stormyes back and jumped off just in time to rake his belly with her paws before he turned on her. " Nice job! " Cottonfire pointed out. " You're going to be a real fighter!" Daypaw whirled around to give Cottonfire a pleased look, before Cottonfire gave Stormeye the news. Just as she opened her mouth, she heard yelling from Grasstail. He had been on the dawn patrol and was now racing towards them. " Help! We're being attacked by foxes!"

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3 days ago
MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEE
3 days ago
Wow that is amazing! PLEASE more I have to know.
27 days ago
That’s so good! Please make another!
36 days ago
sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!i am writing a sequel to it
43 days ago
I NEED ANOTHER STORY BUT REALLY WHY DOES SWEET INOCENT BRAKENFALL DIE
44 days ago
OMG so awesome please make it longer, but WHY TWO MATES
44 days ago
Great story I loved it, I just recommend that is longer. >;3
51 days ago
well i might be working on the second book if i have time Nightleaf
51 days ago
really jayfeather? which ones were yours?
63 days ago
I didn’t like the bad ending :(
72 days ago
I realized that you commented on my fan fictions thanks Hanah
90 days ago
oh yeah whoops i didnt mean two ppl
98 days ago
"Did you really think I would mate two people?" PEOPLE??????? Don't you mean CATS?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? OMG YOUR A TWOLEG! GET AWAY
98 days ago
Ssh be quiet! We don't want both my mates to get caught do we?" Jade meowed.
"WHAT!" Cottonfire and Dayflight exclaimed at the same time. " You mated with both of us? How could you betray me like that!" Cottonfire demanded. Suddenly there was a yowl and Dayflight fell do the ground." My kits! They're coming!"
"No it's too early! " meowed Cottonfire. "Well do something Jade! She's your mate too! "
"Did you really think I would mate two people? I only ever loved you. It was her who wanted to mate. So I let her. " Jade meowed coolly. Dayflight writhed on the ground in pain as her kits were born. "Help me! I can't do this!" Daylight yelled. Cottonfire started back to camp to get Feathershine but Jade stopped her. " No. I will take care of her. " but Jade just stood there and watched as Dayflight struggled. Soon she stopped wiggling and lay still, her eyes still and glazed with pain that never went away. "You killed her!" Cottonfire yelled. " You killed her and now there is no mother for these kits!
98 days ago
TWO MATES?!And he let her die.As Cottonfire paced around the nursery, she heard a huge caterwauling. She raced into the den and to her pleasure found Feathershine standing over a beautiful cream she cat with three kits at her belly. "Oh Rosetail they're wonderful!" meowed Cottonfire. Apparently Rosetail saw the longing in her eyes. "It will be your turn soon enough now. " she stated with a glance at Brakenfall. " You two seem to be getting closer!"
"Yes, we are. But I don't need a mate right now. I have my Clan to look after. Who's going to be deputy when I'm in the nursery caring for kits? My Clan needs me. Not Brakenfall." And with that Cottonfire padded out of the nursery to see how the camp was getting on. All looked well, so she decided to go tell Stormeye about his kits and to see how Daypaws training was going. She walked out of camp to the Training Clearing. She found Stormeye showing Daypaw a fighting move. "Ok. Now it's your turn." Meowed Stormeye. Daypaw raced forward and leaped and twisted onto Stormyes back and jumped off just in time to rake his belly with her paws before he turned on her. " Nice job! " Cottonfire pointed out. " You're going to be a real fighter!" Daypaw whirled around to give Cottonfire a pleased look, before Cottonfire gave Stormeye the news. Just as she opened her mouth, she heard yelling from Grasstail. He had been on the dawn patrol and was now racing towards them. " Help! We're being attacked by foxes!"
98 days ago
OMG this is craysee TWO MATES???????????????
107 days ago
i honestly dont know why i did,, i wanted it to be interesting. but for those who have read dawn of the clans, i guess its kinda like the annoying part where they just kill off bright stream!!
108 days ago
🥺 I love the character Dayflight!why did you kill her?...So I agree with Thrushsong!🤔But otherwise I think it’s good
129 days ago
i am working on a second one so hope yall read it when it comes out!!!
143 days ago
I love your story! Please please please write more!