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My Alternate Life: Middle School, Something I Know Nothing About [Ep. 1]

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Hey, people! I decided it would be fun to wrote fanfics about myself--if I was born in an alternate universe. So some things will be similar to my life, but some will be entirely different. (I want to put an exclamation mark there but that'd be too many) And I would love to hear feedback & critique in the comments!

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It did not seem like a day where everything would change. Clear skies, cool breeze, and the last of the happy-go-lucky me had just came back from hanging out with Belinda and Sara, my friends from horse riding classes.
"Nikki!" Mom called from the living room, "we have... big news," I sprinted to Mom.
"What? What is it! Come on, I have to know!" I exclaimed. My family was homeschooled, so even though it was the beginning of the school year, all of us were home.
"You might not take this well... Samson and Larry didn't," Samson and Larry were my brothers, Samson the older and Larry the younger, ages six and thirteen. I had a sister, Kayley, too, who was fifteen, and Mom was pregnant--meaning an even bigger family!
"What is it?" I asked again. I was anxious to know.
"Well, as you know, a baby's on the way, and they're a lot of work. Dad's on his work trip when the baby's due, and it would be really hard for me to homeschool you by myself, with a baby. So Dad and I have come to a decision--we're going to put you into a public school."
"A WHAT? You mean... we won't be homeschooled anymore? But we've always been--"
"It's for the best," Mom replied, "and we've decided to get you and Samson a phone early."
So. No more staying at home for long periods of time, no more, no more. I didn't even know anything about middle school! How could they do this to me--to all of us?

Comments (26)

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328 days ago
The final one is out!
382 days ago
I should probably make the next one of these soon...
410 days ago
I suggest you make it till chapter ten.
Also, thanks for commenting on my The Ballet Shoe story!!!!! Pls check out my quizzes under my nickname— Neveah Hor. Thanks!
410 days ago
Well, maybe not years. Months maybe? A couple of years? IDK
410 days ago
Thanks! How long do u think I should make it? I literally have no plan and might just keep making these for like, years if I have nothing else to do
411 days ago
I like this........................
411 days ago
Ok I wrote the 6th
422 days ago
GUYS I NEED IDEAS! I'VE RUN OUT AFTER EPISODE 5, AND IF I DON'T HAVE ANY, I CAN'T WRITE MORE! (Me thinks*: That's obvious) SO PLZ, IF YOU HAVE AAANNNY IDEAS AAT AALLL,
TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
426 days ago
Episode 5 is coming out soon!
443 days ago
Episode 4 will come out soon. Sorry it's taken so long! I've been distracted@_@
452 days ago
And, a question for people who go to public/private schools, is horseback riding something that people might decide to make a club about, or would it be completely outside of school?
452 days ago
Okay, thx.
453 days ago
Uh oh. Hello AddyNick. I just wanted to let you know that my "does he really like you?" test, the one that we've been commenting on, isn't under my name in "my tests" anymore!!! So just to let you know, if you ever want to look for it, go to the homepage "love/relationship quizzes" and search, right about the comments section in the search bar, "the love test to end all love tests". You should find it there. Sorry!
453 days ago
Yeah I like it! I'd call it a series.
453 days ago
Because DO PEOPLE NOT LIKE COMMENTING OR SOMETHING???
453 days ago
Do you like these... IDK what to call them??? A series, with episodes??? Episodes, like a series???
453 days ago
Congrats!
455 days ago
I don't have an iPad, but I managed to write Ep. 3!
455 days ago
Yikes that's never happened to me before 😬 sorry I guess I'm not much help. Maybe try typing up your quiz on another device? Family computer? iPad? Anything? (Honestly I don't have an iPad so if you don't, join the club)
456 days ago
And here's something more important: when I click on somethings it often says, "conform sub remission," or "your search timed out," or "this site can't be reached." I have seriously tried to write episode 3 like 6 TIMES and it keep on saying that--does anyone know how to stop this from happening so often?