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This is a poem.
It is about how some things on this site make me feel.

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    I saw what they said
    They put some of what I feel to bed
    Nah I'm not seeing green, blue or red.
    And yes they fed
    Me some lightness
    And now some brightness
    Lies within me
    Because when people can be
    At their very best
    And not making a bad jest
    It is beautiful
    And wonderful
    And every other good "ful"
    When people are understanding
    And not letting the negative feeling
    Of anger, fear, sadness, or despair
    Overwhelm them and overtake them
    It's much better than any sort of M&M
    They can make you feel
    More than surreal
    And I
    Feel like I could fly.

Comments (10)

autorenew

209 days ago
Lol ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ except I didn't lol
219 days ago
Youโ€™re welcome. Oh wait, you wrote that 75 days ago and I only just thought to check it.
294 days ago
Thanks
294 days ago
Great poem, I agree with it
300 days ago
Tysm, TheQuizzyAdict!
300 days ago
Ur a nice poet
307 days ago
๐Ÿ˜‹
307 days ago
Funny thing, this is referencing to the comments that are mostly in my "Alone With My Thoughts" fanfic!
307 days ago
Cool poem. I feel like it would reference to commenting, if I wrote this! I can write some poetry, but I don't do it often, as my poetic thoughts are usually about the guy I like...
308 days ago
What do you think of my poem?