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Let her go

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    I held her hand all the way through. At home, in the ambulance and now. On her bed. It's just her and I. I take a deep breath and look at her for the final time. Her beautiful face looked back up at me. I wished I could help her. But I had no choice. I couldn't do anything.
    She slowly started to close her eyes. I still held her hand but it was gradually getting lighter and lighter. I tear rolled down my cheek as I saw her struggle. "I love you," I whispered and she took her last breath.

    ~It was time to let her go once and for all~

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14 days ago
Well thanks!!!!!!
14 days ago
Wow Iโ€™m not sure what to think.
But good writing!
14 days ago
What happened to the description thingy??????? Anyways there was one and 143 I was bored lol... NHYT theres gonna be a part 2???? ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚... Kaity... yeah
14 days ago
Oh dear. What did she die???????????????????????????
14 days ago
Wow... itโ€™s really captivating!!! Look forward to chapter 2!!
14 days ago
Um so what was this inspired by?
15 days ago
Yeah.... this isn't very good ๐Ÿ˜‚