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The Real World

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This was inspired by Erin Hanson's poem called Welcome To Society which one of my friend's showed me. You can search it up on Google because it is a beautiful poem and she's a great poet.

    Welcome to the real world
    Where no one will agree
    Welcome to the real life
    Where it is not a breeze
    Not everyone will be happy
    Not everyone is nice
    So be prepared to find people
    Who'll be friends with a price

    But if we all work together
    Do this step by step
    We can make peace, not war
    Everyone can be loved
    Yes, there will be a few people
    Who won't agree with us
    But we won't let those other people
    Take away our joy

    You really think the world could change?
    Are you thinking straight?
    Haven't you seen the real world Where people are so mean?
    They kill and hurt
    Starve and wreck
    Do anything they can
    You need to think about your choice to change all this cruelty
    You'll probably get just more hurt
    This is the real world

    Yes, there is a problem
    A huge one I must say
    But with the help of everyone
    Then humanity'll stay
    Everyone can live a life
    A life that's free of fear
    A life where everyone
    Will have an ear to hear
    So now I want to ask you
    To ask the whole wide world
    Will you help me with this task
    To make this place
    The real world?

    (Inspired by Erin Hanson's Welcome To Society)

Comments (13)


131 days ago
Shadowheart lol u have been forgiven šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Sagittariusbaby thankssssssssssss
132 days ago
Actually that was just me lol I said thanks for Quizzy. Please forgive meh Quizzy. šŸ˜…
132 days ago
134 days ago
WOOOWWWWWWEEE Quizzy this is amazing!
136 days ago
138 days ago
140 days ago
Shadowheart exactllyyyyyy
140 days ago
I feel bad about how people pollute the environment. Like, cause harm to your home?!? I'm not a vsco girl but seriously, why does nobody want to save the turtles?! There living things like us!
142 days ago
Yippeee thanks 143 and NHYT!!!!!
142 days ago
This poem is well-written, good job!!
142 days ago
Wow true! Iā€™m checking out Welcome to Society right now thx!
143 days ago
I meant HOW was it lol
143 days ago
So was it?