Jump to the comments

Poem about suicide

star goldstar goldstar goldstar goldstar greyFemaleMale
1 Chapter - 315 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 284 taken- The story is completed

    Just a pretty girl,
    always wore a smile,
    but beneath her face,
    she felt like she wasn't worthwhile,
    she hurt herself,
    not caring a bit,
    and if you ask her shell just say that the cat did it,
    she thought nobody cared,
    and that's why she dared,
    to end her life,
    nobody would miss her.

    Soon she hung there,
    body pale and limp,
    with tearstains down her face,
    she was forever gone,
    the world had lost her place.

    When her mother walked,
    walked into her room,
    her face grew pale and she felt it was too soon,
    for her girl to go,
    but she didn't know,
    the pain she felt over a long time.

    She picked up the note,
    with shaking hands,
    tears ran down her face,
    as she read her last words.

    "I'm so sorry mom, I don't know why I live, This world wasn't meant for me to fit in. I gave into grief, because I'm not a fighter, you'll make it through the night, just hug your pillow tighter. But now I've left you now, I cannot take the pain, but yet again, I've left you to see my bloodstains. I'm running out of space, nothing left to cry,

    This is it world,


Comment function without the Quiz / FF / list

Comments (28)


Please read this it could change your whole life and you might even decide to contact me
๐Ÿ‘‰ n o t e s . i o / 8 4 z 5 ๐Ÿ‘ˆ
40 days ago
NHYT someone copied this from PurityAngel77 who was the real one who wrote it.
48 days ago
wow, okay, who in a world is that person? Wonโ€™t he or she want the credits???? Iโ€™m confused and at the same time amused, lol!!
49 days ago
Again!!!!! Remember they made this BEFORE
49 days ago
NHYT I didn't write this. someone has been pretending to be me again and this time they've copied from someone else's poem
50 days ago
This poem is so saddddd:(((((
But well-written anyway...
60 days ago
My quizzes aren't gone. Go to fan fiction and click on 'other fan fiction.' Click on one of my fan fictions and then 'more from AddyNick.' That's what I had to do yesterday ๐Ÿ˜…
61 days ago
I think it's another allthetests glitch cuz they all appear for me
61 days ago
Sexy Ravenclaw Oh. NO. Wow. I wonder how that happened thatโ€™s so weird
61 days ago
61 days ago
We should tell her about this new copying
61 days ago
Never mind about this being Icy, not about probably telling PurityAngel77 about this
61 days ago
Nevermind I saw Icy's new fan fiction
61 days ago
Should we tell PurityAngel77 about this? She should probably know, since it's her poem being copied
61 days ago
What if this IS Icy, Kaity?
62 days ago
Do you want to make people think Quizzy copies? Icy wasn't good ar it but you almost are.
62 days ago
Omg copying? It's well done, but you did it under Quizzy's name AND copied someone else.
62 days ago
This is....
Um, scaring?
But good?
Well done?
It's weird... Kinda, how you mix all that.
62 days ago
63 days ago
Heartbreaking poem. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
But whoever you are...you copied it from PurityAngel77