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Middle School, Something I Know Nothing About: Ep. 9 (My Alt. Life Final Episode)

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6 Chapter - 1.666 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 581 taken- The story is completed

Finally, October 24th is here!

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"Why are dresses so hot?" Jill asked. "I think I might DIE!"
"In a few hours, you'll be out of it!" Kayla replied.
"The school has air conditioning," I added. My friends and I had decided to go to Kayla's house to prepare for the dance, which was in an hour. Prepare as in, mostly talk and Jill, Kayla, and Meg put on makeup.
"I will forever be grateful for air conditioning," Jill said.
"You're very dramatic," Gwen observed. Jill shrugged.
"I'm just excited! In an hour, we go to our first-ever dance!"
"She's allowed to be excited, Gwen," Meg said. "Nikki, are you allowed to wear makeup?"
"My mom said I could if I wanted to, just for this," I replied. "But I'm not sure I do." Then Kayla added, "you should try it! You can borrow some of mine if you want to."
"Makeup's stupid," Gwen announced. "It's like you're telling the world, 'I don't want you to see my real face, I want you to see a fake.'"
"Makeup isn't all bad," Meg replied. "You could always choose to put just blush, it lipstick, or eyeshadow or something."
"That's still covering your face," Gwen muttered. Meg pretended not to hear her. She asked me if I was going to try makeup.
"I guess I'll try a little..." I responded.
"Great!" Jill exclaimed, "want some help applying it?"

Comments (26)

autorenew

327 days ago
The final one is out!
380 days ago
I should probably make the next one of these soon...
408 days ago
I suggest you make it till chapter ten.
Also, thanks for commenting on my The Ballet Shoe story!!!!! Pls check out my quizzes under my nickname— Neveah Hor. Thanks!
409 days ago
Well, maybe not years. Months maybe? A couple of years? IDK
409 days ago
Thanks! How long do u think I should make it? I literally have no plan and might just keep making these for like, years if I have nothing else to do
409 days ago
I like this........................
410 days ago
Ok I wrote the 6th
421 days ago
GUYS I NEED IDEAS! I'VE RUN OUT AFTER EPISODE 5, AND IF I DON'T HAVE ANY, I CAN'T WRITE MORE! (Me thinks*: That's obvious) SO PLZ, IF YOU HAVE AAANNNY IDEAS AAT AALLL,
TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
425 days ago
Episode 5 is coming out soon!
442 days ago
Episode 4 will come out soon. Sorry it's taken so long! I've been distracted@_@
451 days ago
And, a question for people who go to public/private schools, is horseback riding something that people might decide to make a club about, or would it be completely outside of school?
451 days ago
Okay, thx.
451 days ago
Uh oh. Hello AddyNick. I just wanted to let you know that my "does he really like you?" test, the one that we've been commenting on, isn't under my name in "my tests" anymore!!! So just to let you know, if you ever want to look for it, go to the homepage "love/relationship quizzes" and search, right about the comments section in the search bar, "the love test to end all love tests". You should find it there. Sorry!
451 days ago
Yeah I like it! I'd call it a series.
452 days ago
Because DO PEOPLE NOT LIKE COMMENTING OR SOMETHING???
452 days ago
Do you like these... IDK what to call them??? A series, with episodes??? Episodes, like a series???
452 days ago
Congrats!
453 days ago
I don't have an iPad, but I managed to write Ep. 3!
453 days ago
Yikes that's never happened to me before 😬 sorry I guess I'm not much help. Maybe try typing up your quiz on another device? Family computer? iPad? Anything? (Honestly I don't have an iPad so if you don't, join the club)
455 days ago
And here's something more important: when I click on somethings it often says, "conform sub remission," or "your search timed out," or "this site can't be reached." I have seriously tried to write episode 3 like 6 TIMES and it keep on saying that--does anyone know how to stop this from happening so often?