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Death.

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I have had some heavy experiences with it and this is what it feels like.

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    The first time, it's a shock.Sad, frightening, terrifying.You can't believe it actually happened.This is something that happens to other people, people in books, not you.

    The second time, is like the first, except you know, deep down, with a heavy certainty, that they are dead.No more among us.

    The third time, it isn't shocking any more.The fright, terrifyingness, and shock, are replaced with depression.If there are any more times, it just makes you sadder, more depressed.

Comments (11)

autorenew

130 days ago
OMG GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
157 days ago
Precisely how I feel!Thank thou!
162 days ago
This is like looking back on my life too. I agree though, the dead are at peace, you shouldn't mourn too long. That just makes you selfish. Rejoice in their life and all the things that made them happy. (My death with is for someone to play the song "Be Happy" on the day I die. True story)! And I respect you for not ending it all. That takes a lot of strength. In which I'm not so sure I will always have.๐Ÿ‘
270 days ago
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296 days ago
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323 days ago
This is well written but itโ€™s so sadddddd:((
329 days ago
Youโ€™re welcome ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’
330 days ago
Awwww,thank you so much๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’”โค๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’”โค๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜š

I'm really,really,really grateful that I've been able to get past it,like not dwelling on it and being morose all the time.

And again,thank you so much.๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’šโคโค๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š
330 days ago
Hey, I have had love ones die too. Itโ€™s so hard. Please if you need to talk to someone...Iโ€™m here too
330 days ago
Oh i'm sorry that u had to go through something as terrifying as this. I hope it doesn't happen again. Plz stay strong and I'm glad ur still here today ๐Ÿ’
331 days ago
Remember though,the people or animals who died are at peace,at rest.Its you who you feel sorry for,not them.