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This is a poem about negativity. The poem describes how I feel a lot of the time so please no hate. This is very tough for me. If anyone else is going through this then please remember that you are not alone and that it will get better someday 💖

    It swirls around my head all day
    It won't go away
    All it will do is stay
    Even when asleep I lay

    It will never leave me alone
    It has the harshest tone
    All it does to me is moan
    Just like a repeating drone

    I try to think like Positive
    But Positive won't live
    So instead of Positive
    Comes the dreadful Negative

    Negative keeps haunting me
    It won't let me be
    Why can't I be free without
    Negative screaming at me

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Comments (19)


9 days ago
Thank you!
13 days ago
Hope ur state gets better, Quizzy.
22 days ago
NHYT thank you!

Mentally disturbed thank you and I hope things get better for you too 💖
26 days ago
hey im going through the same thing too just know ur not alone and i hope things get better for u :))))
26 days ago
Fantastic and well-written poem...
I wish you all the best for those tough things you are going through!
27 days ago
Gracie thank you! Also I hope ur anxiety gets better someday 💜💜💜

Fellow Earthling I'm so sorry to hear that you've been through such tough times. I'm sure it'll get better someday 💖
27 days ago
Yep my life is poo at the moment
27 days ago
I feel a bit like this too. Especially when Yaren,is being mean to me. Especially when I think about telling Alex that I like him but I get to scared. Especially when my friends ditch me for Yaren. Especially when Freya ripped up my timetable. Especially when I miss my BFFS who all go to different schools. Especially when it's the holidays and I dont see ANY of my friends. But rarely, I do find happiness.
28 days ago
This is almost exactly how it feels to have anxiety! You described this so well!!! I love it!
29 days ago
Kaity I know lol 😂😂😅😅😅

And thank you!
29 days ago
Lol nobody ever reported it. But this is CRAZY AWESOME
30 days ago
Thanks Sexy Ravenclaw. Yes, I will definitely stay strong and never give up
30 days ago
Ziz is vonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stay strong and carry on!!!
30 days ago
Oh... Really? Oh thanks AddyNick!
30 days ago
This is a very good poem, Quizzy...
30 days ago
143 oh I hope you're ok then. Yes if we stay strong then we can do this 💕💕💕
30 days ago
TheQuizzyAddict I’ve been trying to think positively lately. Ik how hard it is too. But we can get through this 💗💗💗💗💗
30 days ago
Oh wow it's already in the not included
30 days ago
I hate how the number for the chapter always gets in the way.

Also I know I'm not very good at poems...