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The Demons

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Another poem by me which could mean different things to different people. I feel that's it's quite... dark.

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    The demons have surrounded me
    Appearing one by one
    Some come slowly but some quickly
    They want me to be done

    For what I have done in the past
    Is not forgivable
    They want to get revenge at last
    My lies aren't believable

    The demons are way closer now
    They're close enough to kill
    Let me be free - they won't allow
    I can't keep myself still

    One by one they come at me
    I scream and shout and yell
    Soon I give up reluctantly
    As I take the path to Hell

Comments (20)

autorenew

126 days ago
Hey quizzy this was very emotional but I loved your poem and it is written very well
171 days ago
hi (57826) 1 seconds ago
If anyone sees us can please try to send it @TheQuizzyAddict or anyone you know whoโ€™s suffering
stay alive (hi) (57826) 3 minutes ago
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hi (57826) 5 minutes ago
also not just @TheQuizzyAddict but to every who might see this that are suffering
hi (57826) 8 minutes ago
also your not tour i canโ€™t type
lol Vired (57826) 10 minutes ago
I Meant burden burden
hi (57826) 11 minutes ago
pls get help with trusted adult I know itโ€™s tough but you will get though this I care for you person Iโ€™ve never met before. Pls live for me if no one alse Iโ€™m sorry you feel that way btw your not a verdin on everyone else You might think that but itโ€™s not true tour amazing a pice of work and thereโ€™s no way you should give up and dystroye great unique art pls tell you parents Pls and during theses tough times Know your not alone I recomendable Dr1ven i industries on YouTube I was scrolling through TikTok and I found it so yeah. Pls stay alive for me
294 days ago
AllTheTests.com rocks!!!!
296 days ago
Yeah quizzy i will remember that. tysm :)
297 days ago
Well, Quizzy, You cant know 4 sure if it will come again and tysm 4 the support! :) :) :)
297 days ago
TheFadedWalker500 hey, it's ok. It must be rlly difficult but plz just remember that it was on the past and it hasn't come in ages so it probably wont come again. I know I'm not doing that much to help but plz just remember that we r all here for u if u need to talk to us ๐Ÿค—
298 days ago
Plz help me im paralyzed by fear... seriously. I'm literally shaking while i write this. I'm afraid the "shadow person" will come after me again. HELP!
298 days ago
BTW, thx quizzy great poem
298 days ago
Y'know, im afraid cause i had a paranormal encounter 4 yrs ago and im afraid itll happen again im constantly on edge help me
298 days ago
Aw well hope in the future ur not afraid ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š
299 days ago
I'm afraid most of the time.
305 days ago
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
306 days ago
Ravenclaw I hope you overcome this and instead think positively. Best of luck ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž
306 days ago
It is my self hating thoughts.I call myself names that I would never allow anyone else to call me.
309 days ago
143 that's understandable. But it must also be very hard. I'm glad that ur trying to defeat the demons. I hope that someday u do ๐Ÿงก
309 days ago
To me, the demons are my own emotional thoughts which threaten to destroy me from within.
The times I say I hate myself, those are demons.
However Iโ€™ve been trying to counteract those thoughts with ones like โ€œIโ€™m doing great today,โ€ and โ€œI love myself.โ€
I really hope someday I can defeat my demons once and for all and I hope you guys do too ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–
311 days ago
That they're not gonna spoil ur life*
311 days ago
I'm glad that ur not gonna spoil ur life! U go girl!
312 days ago
To me, the demons are the people who hate me and dont like me.

But I wont let them spoil my life
313 days ago
So... what does this poem mean to you? To me, the demons are my regrets and wrong doings from the past and they are trying to punish me. Basically, it's just my thoughts really. What does it mean to you though? It could mean the same but I'm curious...