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TYOA: A Change of Plans (Book 9)

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I hope you like it. The point of view is Nadia.:)

We were all sitting in silence at the abandoned church that had become our temporary home. I wondered what the others thought about what had just happened.
We continued to stare at each other.
And I continued to regret joining Nora.
Sure, she was my friend. But there were others here, so why did I feel the need to tag along? Nothing good had happened. I just left school and everything that was there for me. This wasn't some "great adventure" or anything like that. It was just us running, from place to place, never staying anywhere for long.
Except for here.
It had been a week and a half since we came, and five days since the fiasco with the six girls who kidnapped Sahara. It was our biggest failure yet. At least Sandy had been able, so far, to stay at her home. Jason Davidson hadn't appeared, but that might have been bad as well as good.
"Someone say something!" Suddenly burst out of me.
"I have it," Casey said.

Comments (38)


114 days ago
There are 10 books and 3 parallel thingies. I'm 99% sure that there are 3 parallels, at least
130 days ago
How many of these are there again
149 days ago
I didn't realize it could be seen as creepy... anyway. Thanks
150 days ago
Wow.........CREEEEEEEEEPY story!!!!!!!
190 days ago
THANK YOU IF YOU ARE STILL READING!!! I know it's long, but it's also almost finished!
286 days ago
Yay cant wait 4 book 9
297 days ago
Thanks TheFadedWalker500! Book 9 may come out soon... and it may be in Nadia's point of view...
300 days ago
Huh. This is really intersting. BTW, AddyNick, thx 4 taking my alan walker quiz! if you go back to the one you took, I told you who Alan is. :)
307 days ago
Thanks Kaity!
308 days ago
This new one is really good. Love ittttt
347 days ago
Jason Davidson, Ethan, Kellie, Sandyn
350 days ago
I should REALLY probably make the next of these... I'm thinking of going back to like, Casey's and Nora's perspectives... maybe someone else's too...
367 days ago
But thanks
367 days ago
It has a little of a weird ending, though...
Maybe the next book will fix that... (by next I mean next I write, not the 3rd)
369 days ago
Hi I like ur book Brushes and Canvase
380 days ago
Thx! I'm homeschool tooooooooo and most series here have the same comments, maybe all
382 days ago
How does this have the same comments as no.1
382 days ago
I like it. Sometimes I have to rewrite ny books.... I had to write the minecraft one five times! I'm homeschool. I write books without plans and am almost ready to publish one.
390 days ago
Yeah, I’ve read book 4 already, nice and thanks for commenting on mine too:)
393 days ago
Thx and sure NHYT! (Although I've long since written book 4:) I think in the next book/part/whatever-u-want-to-call-it I'm going 2 make a chase better. Well, more exciting and not a repeat of like, three other chases... am I just rambling? Bye!