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The Interplanet Art Academy--Claw (5) -part one-

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I've been having trouble publishing this, so I decided to write number 5 one part at a time. I'm sorry it's taken so long

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    Nicolette Quizzy

    We were dabbling in each other's art this Thursday. Looking back, it made perfect sense for the spy to make her—or his—move.
    I had opted for trying Dance and Instruments—although Instruments wasn't something you were tested for, for some reason. Anyway, Colette Claw, Victoria Littler, Patrick Michael, Nathan Sanders, Jania Brooklyn and I walked out of Instruments. Margaret and Penelope Crazy-Name joined Jania, Colette, Ravenia and I walking to the cafeteria—and I didn’t expect anything to happen.
    Then Victoria happened.
    She just walked up and grabbed Colette.
    “Meet up with you at lunch?” Ravenia asked, as if nothing unusual was happening. Like Victoria didn’t just grab her sister, who was struggling to get out of Victoria’s grip, and was trying to stuff her in a bag.
    Why are you just standing there, Nicolette? I asked myself. Victoria ran away, while Ravenia kept on walking. Margaret, Penelope, Jania and I stared. Then I chased after Victoria.


Comments (6)

autorenew

116 days ago
Kaity neveah...

I haven't read this in awhile lol but I feel like you squished me and nhyt together. Tbh I forget if the name was a coincidence or- mmm
181 days ago
SO GOOD!
268 days ago
AllTheTests is glitching when I try to write the fifth, so it may be a while until the next comes out. And thank you and you're welcome, Kaity
284 days ago
This is awesome. thanks for writing
295 days ago
However, anything that happened with Yvonne outside of Penelope's dorm is still Yvonne. Sorry for the mistake. If you notice any other inconsistencies, please tell me so I can fix it
296 days ago
I have noticed a mistake. Yvonne Anderson cannot be in Jania/Margaret's dorm at the same time as Penelope's. Instead of Yvonne in Penelope's room, I am switching her with Colette Claw (a character who hasn't been mentioned yet in this story)