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TYOA Parallel III

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A lonely, frozen farm.
A warning that must be taken to heart.

Location: Unknown
At first, the desolate farm provided shelter. Although it was covered with cobwebs, partially caved in, freezing and completely abandoned, Kirsten made it her temporary home.
Then it became a prison.
Every hour, minute, second, of every day and every night, she would wonder if she should stay or go.
The threat to her family was not empty.
But neither was the threat to her friends.
Even when Kirsten's family seemed uncaring, she always loved them. But she knew her friends cared about her.
It was unceasing torment, for her to have an idea about what was happening next but knowing if she went something terrible would happen.
A bike whizzed by, and Kirsten peeked outside. A newspaper lay on the termite-infested porch. This part of town was unlike any other. She opened the door and grabbed it. She always flipped through, usually out of boredom more than anything but also with a tension inside that was equal parts anxiety and hope that Casey, Arwyn, Lavinia, Nadia... too many names...had made the news.
Today, she realized, they had.
They changed the plan. They told the police. Why didn't they tell her? They didn't know what happened to her, she remembered.
But a girl called Sahara had been kidnapped. That was new.
Conflict clouded her thoughts... now more than ever, her friends needed her. But her family needed her to stay. She paced through the farm, then coming to an old T.V. that she had never tried to work, searched for a remote control and found one not too far away.
She tried clicking on the power. Nothing.
Sweat started beading on her forehead, freezing almost as soon as it existed. She had to try. She pressed the power on the television itself and it glowed green.

Comments (38)


105 days ago
There are 10 books and 3 parallel thingies. I'm 99% sure that there are 3 parallels, at least
121 days ago
How many of these are there again
140 days ago
I didn't realize it could be seen as creepy... anyway. Thanks
141 days ago
Wow.........CREEEEEEEEEPY story!!!!!!!
181 days ago
THANK YOU IF YOU ARE STILL READING!!! I know it's long, but it's also almost finished!
277 days ago
Yay cant wait 4 book 9
288 days ago
Thanks TheFadedWalker500! Book 9 may come out soon... and it may be in Nadia's point of view...
291 days ago
Huh. This is really intersting. BTW, AddyNick, thx 4 taking my alan walker quiz! if you go back to the one you took, I told you who Alan is. :)
298 days ago
Thanks Kaity!
299 days ago
This new one is really good. Love ittttt
338 days ago
Jason Davidson, Ethan, Kellie, Sandyn
341 days ago
I should REALLY probably make the next of these... I'm thinking of going back to like, Casey's and Nora's perspectives... maybe someone else's too...
358 days ago
But thanks
358 days ago
It has a little of a weird ending, though...
Maybe the next book will fix that... (by next I mean next I write, not the 3rd)
360 days ago
Hi I like ur book Brushes and Canvase
371 days ago
Thx! I'm homeschool tooooooooo and most series here have the same comments, maybe all
373 days ago
How does this have the same comments as no.1
373 days ago
I like it. Sometimes I have to rewrite ny books.... I had to write the minecraft one five times! I'm homeschool. I write books without plans and am almost ready to publish one.
381 days ago
Yeah, I’ve read book 4 already, nice and thanks for commenting on mine too:)
384 days ago
Thx and sure NHYT! (Although I've long since written book 4:) I think in the next book/part/whatever-u-want-to-call-it I'm going 2 make a chase better. Well, more exciting and not a repeat of like, three other chases... am I just rambling? Bye!