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Eclipsepaw(sight)map: Torn In Two

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So this takes place after Eclipsepaw is asked to be med cat apprentice.He is torn between med cat and warrior.

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    "Eclipsepaw, will you be my apprentice?"Lunaheart asked."I'll think about it."he said. "You ask me...I say I will think.
    "Eclipsepaw, will you be my apprentice?"Lunaheart asked."I'll think about it."he said.

    "You ask me...I say I will think.But when I do, I am torn in two.Torn In twoooo.In two.You say it's right for meeee! I say that I will think.My family, is related to the great! I must follow his pawsteps! But I'm TORN IN TWO!'Hey Eclipsepaw, come hunting with me!'my sister says.But, then you come to me!'Have you thought about it?'you ask.I'm torn in twoooooo.Warrior where I inflict the wounds, or medicine cat, where I heal the wounds.I finally chose which part of me is right!"

    "No, Lunaheart.I will not."

    "I think I did the right thing, but it still feels wrong! I go to the forest.Foxes attack camp! I am decided! I will fight!"

Comments (9)

autorenew

57 days ago
Flagpost, ADMIN ACCOUNT???! (whats the password psst psst)
57 days ago
Well. Flameclaw. I CAN HELP YOU WITH THAT
58 days ago
Oh wait no,I just gave you that art a month prior
58 days ago
I hate this so much but.......Flameclaw when did you learn to draw?
60 days ago
Well not yet may be pather in writing after all my Element Series ;-;
60 days ago
And this is my chance to shove Flameclaw into the lake so he can drown before he kills my pather in writing
62 days ago
Wow,I don't want you to do that.Or I will use my admin account.
62 days ago
NO!This is my chance of glory to kill Flagpost!
63 days ago
*smacks self in face* Flameclaw. Buddy. When are you going to write your chapter? I can write it for you, if you'd like. Goodness gracious, you need help.