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My Word- Against Yours

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I made this right when I woke up, written in a notebook by my bed. All I remember is it had to do with my dream. This is my first time posting a poem, as I usually save them for the book I’m publishing (I don’t wanna deal with copyright and permissions etc)
But this one is strange, and I thought I better publish something as I’ve been talking about it for forever. So here’s my first poem on here- My word- against yours. It’s sort of short, but the meaning is there and deep.

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You’re corrupt, it’s not hard to see
Poison the waters that drain from me
You lie to her, and blame the silence
She may be alone, but her name’s defiance

You can’t tell her who not to be
I’ll side with her, your word against me
If you try to break her, to steal her spirit
My word against yours, the last time you’ll hear it




-Getsemani, August 1st 2020

Comments (16)

autorenew

12 days ago
your a really good poet c: (: whats your book going to be called?
86 days ago
You art welcome!!
86 days ago
Your welcome 😊.
86 days ago
Awww thanks Maddy. Yeah I think I’ll keep it as my word against yours- it’s sounds a lil cliche but as you said it says what it means to me. Thanks for helping me ❤️
86 days ago
I like the name just how it is. Because it speaks what the poem is about and what it means to you. That's just my opinion but if you change it I'm sure everyone will still love it ❤️😊
86 days ago
Been thinking, and although I won’t change the official name on here, I may call it corrupt instead. Whichever has a better ring to it- tell me! Haha
86 days ago
Thanks Raven 🤗❤️
87 days ago
Excellent!
87 days ago
Thanks Maya! ❤️
87 days ago
Wow! This quiz really good!!
87 days ago
Thanks so much guys! (I’m blushing rn haha)
87 days ago
Oh wow this is great it's very creative and deep it's something a professional poet would write 😊
87 days ago
YOU WROTE THIS!!! omag!!this is like soething Maya Angelou would rite!! Congrats!!
87 days ago
Aww, thanks Maya. Haha idk, I wrote it in the morning but maybe I should write more at that time, haha
87 days ago
Wow...... this is like, really good
87 days ago
My first poem on here! I hope you enjoy. This poem is pretty short and I’m kinda nervous posting it, so, like, no hate please ❤️