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Is this what love feels like?

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Is this what love feels like?

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Is this what love feels like?

The burning cold in your stomach when you are not with them?
The smiling at all of their texts?
The knowing you can always be yourself around them?

Is this what love feels like?

The always wanting attention from them?
The loving all their features?
Knowing they are so perfectly imperfect?

Is this what love feels like?

The wanting to cheer them up when they are down?
The perfect moment being the one where you dance in the rain together?
The sharing songs, hoodies, and smiles?

Is this what love feels like?

The desire to hold their hand?
The desire to kiss their lips?
The desire to hug them tightly?

Is this what love feels like?

The way we look at each other?
The teasing?
The promises and secrets?

Is this what love feels like?

The knowing that we're breaking all the rules by being together, but still loving it?
The knowing bad things are thought about people like us?
The not caring at all?

Is this what love feels like?

But society disapproves
and society says so.
"It's against the bible!" "A girl can't love a girl!"

Do they really hate us?

But when I'm with them, my worries fall away. And the light begins to shine.

Is this what love feels like?

Comments (9)

autorenew

6 days ago
@Depressed Human - Thank you :D

@All - I might turn this into a song and maybe publish it someday. Thoughts?
11 days ago
*its relatable .
11 days ago
i really love this poem! im les so it relatble. when u were saying how society disapproves i was thinking "gay?" and then u said a girl cant love a girl and i thought "hell yeah!"
85 days ago
This is a beautiful poem! I love it! And it's so true!
87 days ago
Thank you ❤️ I don't hope you will have love someday, I know you will have love someday.
87 days ago
This made me want to cry... I’m so happy you have this. I’m so happy you have love, and I’m sorry society cannot see that love is greater than hate ❤️ I hope you are happy, and that maybe someday I’ll have love like this. Remember Maya, love is greater than hate. Show them that
87 days ago
This is beautiful. I love it so so much Maya, thanks for sharing ❤️
87 days ago
:) thanks for checking it out!
87 days ago
Except for the romantic part, that’s how I feel with my best friend. I just always want to be with them.