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It's Been a Day

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Umm...hi....I'm not very good with poetic language, so yeah, please don't put any hate comments...

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    It's been a day,
    Since you gone away,
    Why did you go,
    You're coming back I pray?
    It's been a day.

    It's been a month,
    The skies grow grey,
    Where did you go,
    Why didn't you stay?
    It's been a month.

    It's been a year,
    Sure has been a while,
    Since I looked at your face
    Your beautiful smile,
    It's been a year.

    It's been forever,
    We all sit in silence,
    It's been a long time since,
    That day,
    Why did you go?

Comments (12)

autorenew

75 days ago
👍👍👍👍
75 days ago
thanks guys....is it really that good?
75 days ago
Wow. That is so good. 😲 honestly its amazing
77 days ago
The🐬was s u c k s
77 days ago
Nice poem, Loner!!! I💝at poems!!!
78 days ago
This poem is so good!!
78 days ago
such a nice poem good job! it made my eyes a little watery tbh💘💘
78 days ago
Its such a nice poem!! I love this
78 days ago
It's very beautifully written!
78 days ago
Wow this is a great poem! It's amazing!
78 days ago
This is so beautiful Loner! I love how you say how long it’s taken, then go on with the poem, and then say it again! That’s what professionals do ❤️ you’re doing amazing
78 days ago
pls look at this poem i took 15 minutes to make