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It's Been a Day

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Umm...hi....I'm not very good with poetic language, so yeah, please don't put any hate comments...

    It's been a day,
    Since you gone away,
    Why did you go,
    You're coming back I pray?
    It's been a day.

    It's been a month,
    The skies grow grey,
    Where did you go,
    Why didn't you stay?
    It's been a month.

    It's been a year,
    Sure has been a while,
    Since I looked at your face
    Your beautiful smile,
    It's been a year.

    It's been forever,
    We all sit in silence,
    It's been a long time since,
    That day,
    Why did you go?

Comments (12)


75 days ago
75 days ago
thanks guys....is it really that good?
75 days ago
Wow. That is so good. 😲 honestly its amazing
77 days ago
The🐬was s u c k s
77 days ago
Nice poem, Loner!!! I💝at poems!!!
78 days ago
This poem is so good!!
78 days ago
such a nice poem good job! it made my eyes a little watery tbh💘💘
78 days ago
Its such a nice poem!! I love this
78 days ago
It's very beautifully written!
78 days ago
Wow this is a great poem! It's amazing!
78 days ago
This is so beautiful Loner! I love how you say how long it’s taken, then go on with the poem, and then say it again! That’s what professionals do ❤️ you’re doing amazing
78 days ago
pls look at this poem i took 15 minutes to make