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Just another poem that I probably worked too hard on~ so comment if you liked it ❤️

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Will I ever see
What’s beyond what you think of me
If my feelings
Matter?
If my soul
Perspires
The light of hate
And the heat of sadness
Nothing is ever as I viewed it before
Ever is a strong word
One that rocks the seas of self
One that destroys a person’s wealth
One that makes a division clear
Will I ever see
What’s beyond what you think of me
Will I ever see
Or is it
Me

Comments (14)

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18 days ago
Awesome Poem Getsemani
27 days ago
For anyone who wants to use someone else’s style here’s a template:
Creator’s name:
Style name:
Date the style was developed (you may need to look through the creator’s poems):
And anything else you feel it needs
(Creator number, original poem name, etc)
28 days ago
I made another poem- comment if you liked it ❤️
https://www.allthetests.com/quiz38/quiz/1598323938/Done-It
28 days ago
Thanks so much guys!
And Addison is love to read it once it’s done? if you want to credit me by saying the style was developed by me I’d love that as I did spend a long time creating it 😂
28 days ago
WOW
28 days ago
I luv this!!!! I will definitely try out this style. This is a deep and meaningful poem. Well done once again 😻
28 days ago
I'm indigenous, and I'm doing an indigenous writing club and we publish our poems. I am trying to get mine published. It's very personal, so sadly, I can't share it on here, but I'll make another so you can read it.
28 days ago
LOVE IT! SLAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
28 days ago
Same but I think I'll publish all of mine here maybe idk I wanna keep some for when I plan to maybe make a book
28 days ago
Thanks so much guys!
And oh yeahhh I’ve seen that before Maddy, I haven’t done it but someday I think it would be cool (I plan on writing things asa side hobby) to use my own work and make that
28 days ago
This is a good poem! Great job!
28 days ago
There is a poetic style like this one but it's more physical like you'd get a page off a book and draw a picture around words that have meaning to you but yours is more fun
28 days ago
I'd write one like this I love it it's very unique and very you and it's a lovely poem ❤️
28 days ago
Did you guys like it? I’m trying out this new style and I want to hear feedback. I’m working on my poems and I’ve decided if I ever get these published I have to have my own way, and although this is probably a style already I’m nicknaming it the Getsemani Style haha cheesy I know but tell me if you want to write one like this haha. But feedback?