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Foxpaw's Past

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Say hello to Foxpaw's past Special Edition!

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    Fox's Howl opened her eyes. "You opened your eyes for the first time!" Someone mewed. "Hmmm?" Fox's Howl stared where the voice was coming from. "Fox's Howl this is your sister Leaf's Flutter and your brother Fox's Moon." Fox's Howl mother mewed. "Fox's Howl want to play with Father's tail?" Leaf's Flutter said with joy. "I just want to play with this moss ball." Fox's Howl point to a ball of moss near their nest. "Ok..." Leaf's Flutter said as tears started up in her eyes. Fox's Howl saw her mother talking to a tom that looked like her and her brother. Fox's Howl padded towards the two. "Fox's Bark I don't care that you want to go to the Clan territory with the others. You have a family to raise and you want to abandon them and me?" Fox's Howl Mother mewed upset at the tom. Fox's Howl decided that the tom was her father. "Moon's Shine you can come with me along with the kits in a few moons." Fox's Bark purred. "Fine but you will raise your family still." Moon's Shine spat. Someone leaped on to Fox's Howl. When she saw who leaped on her. Fox's Howl went limp. "MOTHER I KILLED FOX'S HOWL!" Fox's Moon yowled. Fox's Howl pushed up on Fox's Moon belly. "That's what you get Fox-Brain." Fox's Howl said teasing her brother. "Kits why don't you listen to the elders stories." Moon's Shine mewed.

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    Fox's Howl was excited. Her and her siblings were going out of cave for the first time! Leaf's Flutter looked excited too. Fox's Moon looked bored. "Fox's Moon aren't you excited that we are going out of the cave for the first time?" Fox's Howl mewed. "Sure." Fox's Moon replied. "You don't sound excited." Leaf's Flutter let her head go to a side. "I'm excited I just choose not to show it." Fox's Moon mewed with blank eyes staring into Fox's Howl's soul. Finally Moon's Shine appeared before Fox's Moon could stare right into the middle of her soul. "Kits are you really to go?" Fox's Howl mother mewed. "Yes!" Fox's Howl and Leaf's Flutter yowled at the same time. "No." Fox's Moon mewed under his breath.

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    "Today is going to be the best day of my life!" Fox's Howl thought. When they were far from the cave it started pouring. Thunder clapped and Lighting glowed as a large cat loomed out from behind a rock. "KITS GET UNDER A ROCK!" Moon's Shine yowled. Fox's Howl was the first one under the rock then Fox's Moon, and Leaf's Flutter was last. Fox's Howl and her siblings watched their mother fought Sharp Tooth. Soon their was killed by a blow to the head from Sharp Tooth. The Sharp Tooth was pawing at Leaf's Flutter trying to get her out. The Sharp Tooth tried several times soon the Sharp Tooth got Leaf's Flutter and clawed her till she bled from the neck to her tail. Fox's Howl started sobbing. She heard several cats attack the Sharp Tooth. Soon the sound if the battle stopped and her father's paw pulled her and Fox's Moon out from under the rock. Fox's Bark put Fox's Howl on his back. One of the other tribe members put Fox's Moon on their back. Fox's Howl cried into her father's neck fur the whole way to the cave.

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    I will continue this 9/25/2020 if not then 9/26/2020

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Comments (22)

autorenew

5 days ago
Hmm Yes Flaggy is writing book three I want to write the last one though
7 days ago
I'm not sure, I can ask Foxhowl. You can definitely add OCs and I'm pretty sure you can write the third book
8 days ago
^^'
This is closed, isn't it
9 days ago
That makes sense. *nods in approval*
9 days ago
Cause I’m too lazy to type JayfeatherBB
10 days ago
And I still don't understand why you call me Jay.
10 days ago
Flagpost, I know. It was fun.
10 days ago
My books are connected :o
10 days ago
XD Flaggy you are writing the next one then
11 days ago
Flaggy be very busy,Jay it's your fault I call myself that
11 days ago
JayfeatherBB if you want to know sometimes read the bookkkkk The kits are going to be to almost six moons in the next book they are five moons right now. Six moons in the last book
11 days ago
JayfeatherBB I thought you were finishing this one ;-;
12 days ago
Sure.......... I guess.........
12 days ago
Flaggy shall do something,fun?
12 days ago
And also what is the book going to be called?
12 days ago
How many moons old are the kits as of the next book?
13 days ago
I still like you! (And its been broken for a long time)
13 days ago
Did allthetets break or does nobody like me anymore
13 days ago
Oh sorry I guess I didn't look so closely
13 days ago
I thought I put that in the list of characters
Fire's pelt is Orange and she has amber eyes
Steam's is silver with dark blue eyes
Breeze's is light gray with light blue eyes
And Cliff is a tan tom with yellow eyes
Cliff has earth, Breeze air, Fire has fire, and Steam has water.