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Chasing the Sun Chapter 8

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2 Chapter - 571 Words - Developed by: - Developed on: - 167 taken- The story is completed

This is a rewrite of the chapter I wrote I didn't think it was good so I wrote a new one before Chapter 9 was made So Here you guys go!

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Foxhowl stared at the pine forest. She had been waiting to see her brother Fox's Moon and her sister Leaf's Flutter in her dreams from The Tribe of Endless Hunting for half a moon now. Foxhowl turned around as a fox colored tom with yellow eyes leaped passed her. "Father!" Foxhowl purred. "I wouldn't miss out on this travel my little fox." Foxhowl's Father mewed. "I miss Fox's Moon and Leaf's Flutter." Foxhowl mewed softly. "I know Foxhowl but what happened with Sharp Tooth was no one's fault stop blaming yourself for what happened. You wanted to come here so look to the bright side." "I will Father." Foxhowl smiled. "Your amber glow like the sun my kit." Foxhowl's Father mewed. "I may still be a kit but I firece!" Foxhowl purred. "Oh yes my firece kit." Foxhowl's Father smiled. Foxhowl rembered what had called her to the pine forest after Sharp Tooth. "Foxhowl didn't you hear me?" Foxhowl's father mewed. "What did you Father?" Foxhowl mewed pulling her away from her thoughts. "I said why don't we worked on your blind side?" Foxhowl's Father mewed. "Ummm sure Father." Foxhowl mewed. Foxhowl heard a stick crack. "Foxhowl climb a tree quickly!" Foxhowl's Father yowled. Foxhowl could smell the dog now as the dog came over the hill. Foxhowl's Father leaped at the dog and bit the dog. The dog fell to the ground. Foxhowl climbed down the tree. "Father are you ok?" Foxhowl asked her father. "Foxhowl I can't take you any farther. You are on your own now." Foxhowl's Father voice cracked. "Why Father why can't you take me any farther?" Foxhowl mewed. "I just can't leave the mountains without the family. I feel broken without your mother, sister, and brother. Leaving the mountains will just break me more." Foxhowl's Father mewed. "I understand I will come back someday Father." Foxhowl mewed.

Comments (195)

autorenew

10 hours ago
We aren't siblings we just live in the same apartment building, but she spends the night a bunch
10 hours ago
Maybe....... LUV WHY DID YOU HAVE TO SAY WE LIVED TOGETHER
19 hours ago
WAIT! YOU TOO ARE SIBLINGS????? :O O_O
21 hours ago
Haha I stole your tablet jay stop acting like we don't live together on the same device
21 hours ago
No, it is coming along fine. I just have to get so many more OCs to complete the game... if any of you who haven't made one yet could, I would appreciate it
21 hours ago
Luv?????????????????????????????
Yesterday
Sure, luv. How are you coming along with the warriors game?
3 days ago
you mean like Bramblestar and Firestar? Cuz nobody can trust Pinestar, can they? lel
4 days ago
Coolio I guess. But it is true, you can never trust a tom unless he is Clan leader of ThunderClan XD
4 days ago
Lets all hope Henry doesn't get back on here and see that because Clearsight is my main OC and if I could be any of them I would be her and she is Henry's mate *blushes*
4 days ago
I have a new side edition to make called Clearsight's Grief.Here is the preview
Clearsight saw Henry with Snowcanary together and sagged slightly crying.Anisepaw walked over to her."What's wrong?"she asked."Never trust a tom."said Clearsight.
4 days ago
Also, I think you should be Dawnbridge and your puppy should be Turtlefin. Supes cute!
4 days ago
Hey guys! I am almost done with my Warrior Cats: The Game, so JayfeatherBB will give you the link in about three weeks! :) Thanks!
5 days ago
So, me and my puppy, Goose, are trying so hard to figure out costumes for Halloween. We are both going to be Warriors from my series, and I am his mother so I am going to be Dawnbridge and he will be Turtlefin or I will be Sheentail and he will be Stark... what's-his-name, or I am Shimmerlight and he is Emberkit or Shinepelt......... But he is a boy so XD which one should I choose?
6 days ago
Good.Also,time for your chapter!I think.Le'me cheak!
6 days ago
I already asked, she doesn't really care but she's excited for Moon Rising, so that one would be good for her I think
6 days ago
My dad wouldn't care if I walked there but I wouldn't make it in time.Ask her what she would rather do
6 days ago
She can take one of mine if she really wants to anyways
6 days ago
I'll ask, she's flexible. You know, if any of you could you know, drive to Washington state and come to my party, that would be great... XD I wish
7 days ago
Since I already have chasing the sun planned out can you ask her if she can do chapter five of moon rising?